When Time Stops

When Time Stops

Well here it is guys! Please tell me if you like it or not! i'm kind of new at this whole writing thing...So yea please read and Review!

published on March 06, 201554 reads 19 readers 19 not completed
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Chapter 2.

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A/N: Hey everyone!! Wow I got a lot of people that asked to be a god or goddess and I’m happy! Hopefully this story is good and you like it! Now on to the Story!!~


(Third Person P.O.V)


(Last time in When Time Stops:  Then she gets out of bed, gets dressed, brushes her hair and teeth, eats breakfast, grabs purse, locks the house, stands in the garage feeling like she forgot something, remembers what she forgot, unlocks one of the doors into the house, goes back into the house, grabs the key to her motorcycle and the Greek mythology book she was reading last night, goes back into the garage, locks the door she unlocked, puts her motorcycles helmet on, opens garage door, gets on motorcycle, turns on motorcycle, and drives to Tails lab wondering what he made this time……..)

Maya parked her motorcycle outside Tails lab and got off of it putting her Hemet on the seat. Then she walked into the lab holding her purse that has the Greek mythology book in it. She walks into one of the rooms in the lab that was full of people that she knew. Sky walks over to Maya and says “Hi Maya!” “Hi Sky” Maya says. “Do you know anything about what Tails made?” Sky asks. “No” “oh, ok!” Sky says then she smiles and walks away. <Probably looking for Dan> Maya thinks. Then Demitri walks up to Maya “hey” he says “Hi Demitri” “So how are you?” “Good, You?” “Good” He smiles and Maya smiles back. Then Tails Says “hi everybody!” into a microphone and everyone goes silent. “Your all probably wondering what I made” everyone mumbles “yea’s” and “yes’s” “Well your about to find out!” Tails says. Then he runs out of the room and comes back in pushing something covered with a tarp on a cart. “This is!” he says then he pulls off the tarp “a time machine” Everyone said a bunch of “Oohs” “ahhhs” and “wows” “Does it work?” Asks Celina. “Of course it d-” He says till an explosion interrupts him. “Mwhahahaha” someone says. “EGGMAN!!” yells Jackie. “Yes it is I, EGGMAN!” Eggman says as he walks through the hole in the wall. He walks over to the machine “and I will be taking this!” he says as he reaches to grab it. “NO!” Yells Swift as she runs over and grabs the machine. “Give it to me GIRL!” Yells Eggman. “Never!” Swift yells back. Then Eggman’s hand hits a button and a portal appears. “Haha!” says Eggman as he jumps in the portal. “No!” Yells Maya and she looks at all of her friends and says “We can’t just let him go to the past like that! What if he rules the world? Or worse destroys it? We have to follow him into the portal to make sure that he doesn’t mess up our future!” everyone yells “Yea!” Then Maya says “then let’s go!” and jumps into the portal and the others followed her……..


A/N: Hey everyone! So much suspense and who knew that in desperate times Maya can be so good at pep-talks? I sure didn’t. Don’t forget to Read and Review! Welp that’s all for this chapter! BAI!!!
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foilflingza
UPDATE
RIGHT NOWWWWWWS
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ThatRandomGirl33
I'LL TRY
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on May 26, 2015
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Weiss_Schnee
Ho damn this is awesome!
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ThatRandomGirl33
Thanks!
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on March 19, 2015
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AlwaysBeInfinite
Awesome!!!
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ThatRandomGirl33
Thanks!
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on March 18, 2015
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Jeweled_Feather
Stop it with the suspense and cliffhangers!! O.O
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ThatRandomGirl33
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on March 18, 2015
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Weiss_Schnee
Damn you, I DON'T WANNA BE LEFT IN SUSPENSE!!!
(Now I know how you guys feel when reading my stories XD)
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ThatRandomGirl33
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AlwaysBeInfinite
Love the suspense!
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ThatRandomGirl33
: D
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ThatRandomGirl33
I have started on it!
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on March 06, 2015
AlwaysBeInfinite
Can't wait to that next chap!
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Paraboilc
There is a typing error in "the dream" part it says I instead of it
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ThatRandomGirl33
?
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ThatRandomGirl33
Thanks! I didn't see it
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on March 06, 2015
Paraboilc
Right before they show each other what they can do in the dream
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Weiss_Schnee
I'm willing to bet they're Zeus and Hera. It makes sense since they're dating, Zeus is the King of Olympus, and Hera is Queen of Olympus.
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on March 06, 2015