a murderers guardian

a murderers guardian

15 year old Mia Millered get into a car crash, having a good soul she is sent to heaven and is assigned to be a guardian angel, to a murder.

published on April 28, 201539 reads 12 readers 5 not completed
Chapter 1.

Heaven

   All i remember is the roads being icy and crashing, my dad putting his arm in front of me and when we hit blood trickling down my face then i was out.  I woke up in the hospital room not being able to move and my mother crying then i felt different, lighter, almost like i was a ghost i realized that the beeping from the heart monitor had stopped i was dead.  I couldn't control myself from floating up as soon as i went through the ceiling i was in a church room but it was even more beautiful and a lot brighter it was hard to explain. A man in a white robe came in.
"Jesus?' i asked
"no" he laughed
"then who are you"?
"just call me Mavis"
"um....ok"
"follow me" he said and i did it felt like i was walking on air, was i? i was thrilled and excited but i knew i was in heaven i mean where else would it be? We stopped at a ledge where millions of angels walked around serving each other cleaning helping.  I looked at marvis finally getting a good look at him, he had black short hair and seemed to be shinning and smiling. it was hard not to smile so i stopped trying and again looked over the heavens of god.
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sisaloofafump
really cool but a lot of grammer mistakes (sorry) anyway, I LOVE the plot line
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Maya_swan
It's ok and thx!
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on June 12, 2015
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on June 12, 2015
MysticMedievalSamuraiPrincess
Add more, please!
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on June 04, 2015
ELINAviolets
Pwease continue it X3
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on April 29, 2015
MysticMedievalSamuraiPrincess
The description sounds very intriguing! I can't wait to read more!
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on April 28, 2015