Diamond the hedgehog ( Re-Write coming soon)

Diamond the hedgehog ( Re-Write coming soon)

Diamond is a princess of Orcia( Or-see-ya). There's an attack and has to leave the kingdom with some freedom fighters. They ask her to join but, another evil group asks her to join too, while kidnapping her. Will she choose good, or die? Can she save Orcia? Can she protect herself?

published on June 09112 reads 20 readers 34 not completed
Chapter 1.

On the Run

Diamond's POV
BEEP BEEP BEEP. i woke up at five- thirty for the party for the people of orcia. I went to my closet. i skimmed through all of my dresses.  I finally found a puffy light blue one.I curled my hair. i  put perfume, put pink lipstick, and black flats. I put my necklace, crown on top of my head. I went down to eat breakfast." Princess, Diamond what would you like to eat today?", henry, my waiter asked. " I would like some tea and two pieces of toast." He bowed and quickly went to the kitchen.I frowned.I hate it when people bow, especially to me. I'm just a princess but, I always dreamed to be a freedom fighter.

My mother- the queen of course sat down."Diamond,why aren't you wearing your black gloves?" "Mother, I don't like to wear gloves." "You do what your told Diamond", she scolded me. She put the gloves on the table.I quickly put them on." Diamond, grab your stuff,and follow me." I didn't answer.She got up. I grabbed my tea, and my black umbrella. We walked out side of the white castle.We sat in our thrones.

Hours later.... At 8:45 the party started. Everyone danced and we sat at our inside thrones.We had a feast too.We danced some more. Everyone was not dressed up fancy.Only the royals do. I was allowed to dance with my friend. Everything was perfect.Just perfect with me and Hannah.Just perfect until....

My mother tapped me on the shoulder.We went to talk. I sat down."Diamond, Maximus and i have heard of bad news.You have to start packing your things quickly." "Yes Diamond, there's great danger.", my father said."Why? What danger?" "We can't tell you honey,",Mother said. "Why not!!" I didn't listen.Instead I ran back to the dance room. I started dancing again. Then, I fell to the floor. Everyone stopped dancing and stared. My mother came running. I had got shot in the leg.Then there was shooting.

"EVERY ONE GET DOWN!", my father yelled. My mother and i ran to my room. All i heard was screaming and shooting. My mother shut the door and we rushed to help me pack. I quickly grabbed my white suit case, and my white back pack. My mother opened my closet and was rushing.I packed random clothes in my suit case. I packed my book. I tried to grabb a pencil, but all of them fell on the ground.My mother put another crown, clothes, and something else in my back pack. My head was pounding because i was scared and was bleeding. My room was a mess. I rushed around and found other clothes.I dove on my bed and looked under my pillow. I opened a small chest and shoved money in my suit case. My mother shoved more money into my back pack.WE were done packing.

My mother grabbed my suit case and grabbed my wrist.I quickly grabbed my back pack.We ran down the stairs.We were almost down the stairs.We heard a loud boom.A robot crashed through the stair case. I screamed. My mother threw me my suit case over to me. "RUN!!", she yelled. I ran but. my leg was aching. I looked back.My mother fell of the stairs and fought the robot.Tears were streaming in my eyes.I finally got to the dance room.I ran past everything. I looked back and my father got shot. I ran out of the castle. I ran on the brick bridge. Robot, dogs were chasing me. A tall man in this ship thing was shooting at me.

This, blue guy, pink girl, red guy, and a silver handsome hedgehog zoomed past  me. I fell to the ground. Some more dogs were crowding over me. I panicked. I fainted.I thought my life was over.i thought i was going to die. The silver hedgehog fought the dogs off. The silver guy picked me up. my arms were around his neck.He carried me into this jet thing. He layed me down.
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toughwolf3
Making an announcement! I'M RE-WRITING THIS STORY! THANKS! X3
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SmolBeanie696
Great story, dude.
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toughwolf3
thx
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sleepysuga
Could I give you some constructive criticism on this story?
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toughwolf3
uh,ok?
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Anonymous11
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!
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toughwolf3
Thank you so much! XD X3
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sapphirethehedgehog
So me and Sonic are now...*blush* okay ^\\\\^ hehehe
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toughwolf3
Not for long. Hehehehehe
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sapphirethehedgehog
*gasp* okie XD
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toughwolf3
Yep
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Rebel_Assasin
SCREW YOU AND YOUR DOUBLE SPACES.
I GIVE ON THIS
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THE DOUBLE SPACES See More▼
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toughwolf3
Haha Lol Xd
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toughwolf3
Ok thx so much.
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breann.west.5
No problem. ^-^
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toughwolf3
ok @ breann.west.5 X3
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breann.west.5
Actually, Lunti and Sunni are together. But if you want, you can pair them in your story. C:
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toughwolf3
is it ok if Lunti is with one of my characters i made?
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breann.west.5
Thanks! ^-^
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toughwolf3
That's amazing @breann.west.5
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toughwolf3
kk
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breann.west.5
Just finished. I'll upload it, hold on. ^_^
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toughwolf3
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breann.west.5
Oh, um...If you like, I could do a redesign of her, so she's no longer a recolor...
And if you want, you could put one of my characters in there. Here they are...
-Lunti the Budgie (Lesbian)
-Sunni the Conure (Lesbian
-Karana Coyote (Straight See More▼
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toughwolf3
@love_sonackie
@sapphirethehedgehog
@swiftelementthedarkhedgewolf
I might use your characters
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sapphirethehedgehog
Oh! Thank you!
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sapphirethehedgehog
Have you read it? What do you think? ^.^U
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sapphirethehedgehog
Thank you! And I know, I want to work on that ^.^U
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toughwolf3
I added your storie to my fav list!!!!
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toughwolf3
Yea, Thx but ppl were complaining that she was a recolor
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sapphirethehedgehog
Diamond seems great too! I've seen at his in my recommend catogory a lot but never got the chance to read it, so finally being able to and seeing my charature in it is amazing! Thank you! plus we both have gem names
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toughwolf3
yea love your character
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