The purple girl

The purple girl

Doll cried into her hands when she saw positive and she never wanted to let Mike know.

published on February 09, 201591 reads 31 readers 17 not completed
Chapter 1.

A dark day

I was in my apartment I was alone...no wife no kids not even a pet to accompany me just a small rundown apartment with a poor freak of nature in it I went outside to check mail and saw a gorgeous young lady she must have been at least 23 she was young and free I blushed in her presence and she looked at me gave me a smile and waved she was so nice and kind fair and.pretty every man's dream come true or...at least my dream come true I blushed harder slowly raising my hand staring at her and waved back then I heard a voice next to her and I failed to see before I recognized the voice "Ready to go get some ice cream babe?" [Mike?] His voice echoed through my head "Yeah baby!"
Doll said happy smiling still as her usual nice self I leaned over to look at her hip where her hand was and saw no ring either a ring was on her other hand or she was just Mike's girlfriend I ran back in the house before Mike could catch a glimpse of me and I thought to myself that day "Ok you've killed several children Vincent surely it's not any harder to stalk a girl besides Mike should be at work tonight at freddys so tonight will be the perfect opportunity to find out if she's married to Mike or not!"
I started to pack some snacks and a few water bottles in a bag I had with me then I went to Mike's home and I was in their backyard I looked in the basement window and saw doll folding laundry with both her hands I saw no ring on either hand and said "yes!" I later on went back to my apartment after a few hours "wow..best night ever.." I went to bed "Vincent! Doll giggles hugging me "Yeah Doll?" I smirked hugging her back "I love you!" She giggled again smiling "I love you too."I blushed she let go of me and leaned in for a kiss just before our lips had touched..."Beep! Beep! Beep!" My alarm clock went off "mmm.?" I got up and turned it off and checked the mail again and there she was just a few feet away from my house she was looking at some clouds go by  giggling happily without a worry in the world I smiled at her presence my eyes still a bit puffy and droopy from being up so late last night at her house Mike wasn't in sight maybe he got killed? Did he come home later? Was he taking a day shift for once? I walked up to doll and smiled "Hi!" She smiled "H-hello.." I smiled back at her "I saw yup yesterday! I never properly introduced myself though! My name is Doll! Doll zateon!" She smiled
"I'm Vincent." I smiled "Nice to meet you Vincent! Want to watch the clouds with me?" She smiled "i-i'd love to!" I smiled blushing remembering yesterday we talked for a little while "haha! Say..your a pretty nice and funny guy! how about we go to my house and hangout more there!" She smiled "of course!" I smiled widely we walked to he'd house and a man jumped from around the corner with a ski mask on "GIVE ME YOUR MONEY NOW!" I stepped in front of doll as he held a gun to her head and I got it a knife "if you hurt her I'll make sure you don't see daylight again!" He punched me and I stabbed him in the stomach as doll gasped he shot me in the leg "AAAH!" I fell then I stabbed him as I fell I stabbed him with the knife as hard as possible and he fell down in a pool of blood soaking my shirt and touching dolls beautiful new shoes "V-Vincent!" She gasped and called 911 "I got a ambulance coming for you ok? Please..don't call me,don't try to find me and please just don't talk to me again Vincent! I'm sorry but somethings wrong with you!" She ran off in tears "DOLL! NO! WAIT!" I was still on the ground covered in blood as I reached my hand out to her as she ran "don't go...." I slowly cried seeing the only one I ever loved see me finally as everyone else did....a monster a ambulance raced my way just around the corner I blacked out after hearing sirens and woke up in a hospital bed "w-where am I?" I asked a woman in white next to me who was apparently a nurse
"your in the hospital recovering...you took a pretty bad shot Mr...um.."
"Vincent." I said "yes Mr. Vincent out took a pretty bad shot to the leg...you should be out of the hospital within 2 days." She smiled I sat there laying back down and sighed and looked out the window of the big city as the nurse left I looked in the stars remembering what we did together "Doll....why did you leave me?" I cried and slowly felt my heart turning black as it was slowly shattering
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JollyWolfGirl
Pls do more!
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on January 22
sonicfoxy1987
really good. Plus Purple Guy is my favorite character. keep writing
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on December 30, 2015
Korra_The_Killer
Keep on writing, this is really good.
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on November 16, 2015
cayleebrown13
can't read all
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on September 22, 2015
seippup12
:O new chapter I good also
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on April 05, 2015
SnakesVenomSans
Chu need to add more
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on March 11, 2015
seippup12
This is..... AMAZING
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seippup12
Ok thx!
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on February 14, 2015
Your_Average_Fangirl
Probably ranging from today to the weekend
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on February 13, 2015
Your_Average_Fangirl
The next the chapter will be out soon enough.
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on February 13, 2015
Your_Average_Fangirl
Thanks! I work hard to make these as long and original as possible and I'm glad to see good feedback from people
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seippup12
Is there going to be a part 2?
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on February 13, 2015
The_Weird_Fangirl_Of_DeathNote
IS SHE PREGGERS?!
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Your_Average_Fangirl
You'll see. :3
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on February 11, 2015
The_Weird_Fangirl_Of_DeathNote
WOW....O-O THINGS ARE GETTIN INTENCE....
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Your_Average_Fangirl
Now things are a bit calmer. :3
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