After this, Jordan met Jane, (Jeff and Jane fought a lot.) and Laughing and Eyeless Jack. She went into the room she woke up in, and Slendy was painting the wall bloodied red. She liked that color. "Jeff." Jeff nodded and walked out. "Slenderman faced her. "Jordan, am I right? Sorry about the other night. You weren't safe at home alone. Your parents are looking for you. Would you like to visit them in the morning?" She nodded, grinning. "Good. Now, take a weapon." His tentacle motioned to the bench next to him. She picked the knife. It was long, and sharp. Slenderman leaped at her. Jordan screamed. "Help!" She squealed. Slenderman tentacle was on her neck, drawing the air out of her. She was able to mutter one word. "Sorry." She threw the knife at Slendy, cuasing him to back up. He let himself back up. "Impressive." She charged, scared. She lept for his face, but knew he would expect that. She lept, but aimed for right. Slenderman, turned in surprise, and Jordan lept for his back. Suddenly, all at once, the door burst open. Jeff ran in, and Slenderman, with one flick, threw Jordan toward the door. She tried to jump, but by the time she fell, Jeff had caught her. They looked eyes for a minute, and then they hastily recovered.
Jordan tried to rush Slenderman again, but Jeff held her back. "No, calm down." She was annoyed. But she let go of the knife. "Don't ever do that again without telling me. Next time, I will kill you." She threatened. She stormed out of e room, and everyone stared. "I need to go outside." Slenderman walked out. "Wait, child." "No! You almost killed me! What is with you!? First you kidnap me. Then you try to be my friends, finally, you nearly kill me!" Everyone was silent. Including Slenderman. Jordan tried to open the front door, and when she did, she found it locked. She fell to her knees, crying. "I... I just want to go home..." Jane came over to her, and everyone else left. "I know, I know. It feels difficult." Jane knelt next to her. "Why did this happen to me? I just wanted to live a normal life!" Jordan had stopped crying, but she was still confused. "Things happen for a reason, and we wanted you to be here. I'll take you to see your parents if you want, first thing in the morning." Jordan hugged her. "Thank you. OMG. The others. What do I say to them?" Jane shook her head. "Act normal. Slender is probably explaining what happened in the other room."
Other than that, really good!