Black Crow's Beginning

This is my Creepypasta OC, Black Roses, beginning. If I do something wrong, please don't yell at me... Enjoy!

published on January 15, 201636 reads 10 readers 1 not completed
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Chapter 4.

The Mending

They heard a shout in the other room. "You what!?" Jeff seemed a little mad. "Jane, will you help me out?" "Of course. Now, go get ready." Jordan. Looked at her, confused. "I want to show around somewhere. And don't worry, I won't try to kill you." Jordan relaxed. "That's reassuring." Jordan got up, and went to her room. "Wait!" Jane called. Come here!" She was led into her room. Jane looked like she was 35, but she ran like she was 15. Jane opened the closet. "This is where you can keep your stuff. Don't worry about the mess. I'll get Slendy to clean it. Him and I are going to have a little chat." Jane looked annoyed. Jordan backed up a little. "Um... I don't have anything to wear." Jane looked up. "You're so right. You might be able to fit into one of my dresses.
When Jordan got into a dress, she looked great. "Now your hair." Someone knocked. "Can I come in?" It was Jeff. "Can he?" Jordan asked. "Come!" Jeff came in, and when he saw Jordan, he blushed, hard. "You look... great!" He went over to Jane, and whispered something in her ear. Jane's face got dark. "That son of a... Jordan, Slendy wants to see you." Jeff waved and too, that as his cue to leave. The door shut. "Will you come with?"

30 minutes later--------

Slenderman, Jane, and Jordan were in the living room. Eyeless Jack came in case a fight broke out, and everyone was tense. "Child, I'm sorry. I just wanted to test your skill." "She looked down. "I should've held my tongue. I'm terrible at that." The intensity went down, but Jordan looked to her left, she saw almost everyone except Jeff and L.J. (Laughing Jack) "Listen, maybe we should forget about this and move on. Next time, tell me when you want to assess me, tell me first. Agreed?" Slender nodded. "Agreed." He stuck out his hand, so Jordan could shake it. Jordan ran over and hugged him. "Cool!" Everyone, including LJ, gasped. Slenderman hesitated for a split second, and then hugged her back. "Now, go have fun child. Jane stay here. You wanted to talk to me?"
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Silent_Ivy
I like it, but I wanted to mention that EJ likes kidneys, not liver.

Other than that, really good!
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on April 10, 2018