Black Crow's Beginning

This is my Creepypasta OC, Black Roses, beginning. If I do something wrong, please don't yell at me... Enjoy!

published on January 15, 201636 reads 10 readers 1 not completed
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Chapter 2.

The Meeting

When Jordan woke up, she remembered. Everything. From Laura being late, to Slender and Jeff. She got up and opened her eyes. She could see! "Where? Where am I?" Someone was on the foot of her bed, sharpening a knife. "Jeff? The killer?" He looked up. "How do you know who I am? And please, it's just Jeff." She answered, "I know all about the creepypasta family. About how everyone died, if they died, and who they really are." He took her by the arm, jerkily, and she gasped. "Don't talk to them unless they talk to you when we meet them, okay?"
She nodded, scared. "Oh! I'm sorry, did I scare you a little?" He asked sincerely. "Yeah, a little." He laughed, and she got up, wanting to go outside. Suddenly, the door burst open, hitting her hand, which was almost on the doorknob. "Hiya! Hey Jeff!" Jordan was on the other wall, looking terrified, a pale white.
"Hey where is.. Oh, sorry." She looked up, knowing it was Hoodie, she wanted to say hi and ask, "Hey Hoodie.", but a warning look from Jeff told her to be silent. "Hi, there. Sorry if I hurt you, do you need ice?" Ask looked really sorry, and she was really scared now. "No, but who are you?" "Oh, me! You can call me Hoodie." He let out his hand, and pulled her up. "I-I'm Jordan. Sorry if I stutter, I'm just really confused right now." He shrugged. "I would be too." Went over to Jeff, asked something, and walked out. "Well that went well." Jeff said, seriously. "Want to go out to meet everyone?" She shrugged, and remarked, "sure why not?" She walked outside of her room, into the hall way, and gasped. Slenderman was waiting for them. "Hello, child." He was calm which was good. Ish.
She said nothing, and went over to him. He wasn't looming over her, but he wasn't exactly her size. "Jeff, can you take our guest around and show her the mansion?" "Sure. Jordan, this is Sle-" "Slenderman. I remember his voice." Please, don't hurt me, she prayed. "Well, we have to go now." Jeff pulled her out hastily. "He's onto you, ya know?" "Yep."
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Silent_Ivy
I like it, but I wanted to mention that EJ likes kidneys, not liver.

Other than that, really good!
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on April 10, 2018