The Ultimate Guide to Mary Sues

Have you ever felt that your OC is a Mary Sue? Have you ever wanted to change a Mary Sue into a good oc? This is the book for you!

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Chapter 3.

Adding flaws

_________ loves to get extremely drunk.

Although they are friends, ___________ and ___________ argue a lot.

________ is a back talker

_______ cannot stand car trips

My OC, ______ gets gassy when she eats pickles

________ loses their train of thought easily

Math is ______'s worst subject. They have a D in that class

Although they are great at [insert game here], ____ is horrible at [game]

_______ gets in a lot of trouble

________ laughs at funerals

_________ eats [something gross such as a bug] which grosses ____ out.(used this one for Bree /loz version/)

______ has bad body odor

________ is terrified of (something that isn't really scary in most fandom, ae fairies)

________ curses a lot.
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SoulOfTheWolves_Inactive
Do you think WolfSun has /to/ much of a tragic past?
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on June 01, 2016
Weiss_Schnee
Just a question about the bi-coloured eyes.
I wanna make an OC that has a small power, but I want one of her eyes to be the colour that matches that power. Normally, she would have brown eyes, but I want her to control small amounts of water, which made me think about making one of her eyes blue....
Should I?
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breann.west.5
It would be ok. As long as she has a reason for the eye thing (Which I can see, she does*
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on April 13, 2016
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on April 13, 2016
Weiss_Schnee
I think I may have made a Anti-Sue now....
I tried to make a new Sonic OC, tried to make her Non-Mary-Sue....
But she just turned out dull, and bland, and boring...
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on April 04, 2016
Weiss_Schnee
..... PM me about this, I need to check and see if Jackie is a Mary-Sue.
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on April 02, 2016
milfs
Thing is, for my CP OC, her weapon is a knife so she can avenge her family using the weapon that the killer used. So, yeah. x3 She has a reason for the knife. Also, sure, R'ena likes Jeff, but her goal is to kill him, so. . . That is SO not a Romantic-Sue. x3 You get it? x3
Excellent guide, though.
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on January 02, 2016