The Sound of Revenge

The Sound of Revenge

I wrote this story a while ago but really want to share it. I will update it regularly so please mark it as a favourite story so you won't miss out. Writing this really helped me get out my emotions into the story. PLEASE READ!

published on May 24, 2014132 reads 11 readers 13 not completed
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Chapter 2.

Mountain of pain

I knelt down to tie my shoe lace, I could feel Jarrod's presence over me. He was still here which was odd as he had finished packing up. I had no idea that he had been waiting for me.
"So you and Drew, eh?" He cooed.
"No we're just friends" I said trying to focus on what books I needed for tonight's homework.
"Oh so you want to play it like that do you?" he said, standing over me. He grabbed be by the hair and pulled be up off the ground.
"Stop it!" I screamed. Before I knew it he was clutching my neck and choking me. "Stop!" I spluttered. Jarrod let me go and I fell to the floor with a thud. As I was getting up he punched me in the ribs and held his hand there so I couldn't breathe. He let go and I fell yet again. He left with his bags while I was crying, weeping silently and dazed.
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logan432
Great writing babe
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MMMMMMM6
thanks logan x
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on August 17, 2014
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on August 17, 2014
getsherlock
Please keep woting
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getsherlock
I mean writing
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MMMMMMM6
there you go. Hope you like the new chapters!
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on August 17, 2014
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on August 14, 2014
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on August 14, 2014
getsherlock
love the new ones, keep writing please
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on July 07, 2014
getsherlock
more more more more :D please
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on July 07, 2014
logan432
I love your new chapters babe :)
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on June 25, 2014
MMMMMMM6
I'm so glad people like my story :) I'll add a new chapter!
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on June 16, 2014
logan432
The new chapters are so good!
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on June 03, 2014
logan432
This is such a great story Maddy! I hope it helps u to write this kind of stuff out.
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on May 31, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
Write more soon!
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on May 26, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
OMG PLEASE write more! This is really good!
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on May 25, 2014