The Sound of Revenge

The Sound of Revenge

I wrote this story a while ago but really want to share it. I will update it regularly so please mark it as a favourite story so you won't miss out. Writing this really helped me get out my emotions into the story. PLEASE READ!

published on May 24, 2014133 reads 12 readers 13 not completed
Chapter 1.

The glare

I got to my locker, feeling sad and withdrawn, isolated even. The day had gone worse then I had expected. I just wanted to be home, curled up on the couch with some ice cream. I put in my combination on my lock and opened it. The door swung open with a bang on Jarrod's door. I looked over at Jarrod who was staring at me with death defying eyes, like he wanted to kill me. I ignored him. Jarrod and I had once gotten along but now all we had for each other was glares.
As I put my books in my bag I saw my crush, Drew in the corner of my eye. He was coming towards me. As he walked past his hand snuck into my bag and pulled out my headphones. He walked off pretending to look casual but I could see laughter in his eyes.

He did a lap of the hall and came back.
"Missing anything there Samantha?" he asked me, trying to hold his laughter in. "I found these headphones and saw they have your name on them" he spoke, holding out the headphones and pointing at the name for me to see. "Yes I think they are mine" I said laughing. I reached out to grab them but Drew pulled them away. "You're gonna have to come and get it if you want it" he smiled, running off. I ran after him. I was laughing for the first time for the week. That's what I loved about Drew, he always made me laugh. Not to mention he was attractive, gorgeous, hot, did I mention he was good looking? I'll quit going on but he was all of those things and more. Unfortunately he wasn't always around. He was a keen runner and was often running during lunch to practice. He was fit and muscly but sometimes I wished that he wasn't so obsessed with running as I never got to see him for too long. I had to fight hard to get my headphones back but eventually I got there. We collapsed in a pile of laughter, I don't think I've ever been so happy as I was at that moment. Which was probably good because what followed this was a mountain of pain.
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logan432
Great writing babe
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MMMMMMM6
thanks logan x
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on August 17, 2014
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on August 17, 2014
getsherlock
Please keep woting
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getsherlock
I mean writing
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MMMMMMM6
there you go. Hope you like the new chapters!
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on August 17, 2014
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on August 14, 2014
getsherlock
love the new ones, keep writing please
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on July 07, 2014
getsherlock
more more more more please
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on July 07, 2014
logan432
I love your new chapters babe
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on June 25, 2014
MMMMMMM6
I'm so glad people like my story I'll add a new chapter!
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on June 16, 2014
logan432
The new chapters are so good!
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on June 03, 2014
logan432
This is such a great story Maddy! I hope it helps u to write this kind of stuff out.
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on May 31, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
Write more soon!
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on May 26, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
OMG PLEASE write more! This is really good!
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on May 25, 2014