The Sound of Revenge

The Sound of Revenge

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published on May 24, 2014132 reads 11 readers 13 not completed
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Chapter 16.

Darcy's sister

I winced as Darcy carried me into his car. The gash in my leg wasn’t bleeding anymore and the blood was clotting but it still hurt. I sat in the passenger seat and Coby and Leo got into the back. I was starting to black out. I had never been very good with blood. All I could think was where was Laura? Finally I got enough energy to say something.
“Leo, where is Laura?” I asked.
“She went home with Ryan” Leo said casually. An alarm went off in my head.
“Are you sure she should have? You know, stranger danger and all?” I said without thinking.
“I wouldn’t be worried. She’s just having some fun. She’s mature. She won’t do anything drastic” Leo said. Obviously he didn’t know about the pregnancy. Yeah, real mature, I thought to myself.
“You can’t talk. Miss stranger danger” Leo said pointing at Darcy.
I couldn’t talk. He was right. I just couldn’t help worrying about Laura.
“How you doing?” Darcy asked as we came to a red light.
“Yeah, I’m alright…” I drifted off. I felt really cold and I was shivering so violently I couldn’t speak.
“Here” Coby said from the back, holding out a blanket.
“Thanks.”
“I would put the heater on but it’s totally busted. I bought this car for cheap, but it’s a total wreck” Darcy said softly, looking over at me once in a while.
“It’s ok” I chattered.
“Here we are anyway” said Darcy pulling into a house. “Just be wary of my sister. She can be a little overbearing at times” he said helping me out of the car. Coby chuckled.
“I’m sure she’s lovely” I said.
Turns out, his sister was a 26 year old woman called Mel. She was overbearing, but she patched up my leg and so I was thankful. Darcy had lived with his sister for a year. His parents forced him to and he wasn’t complaining. That didn’t surprise me after I heard what he was about to say.
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logan432
Great writing babe
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MMMMMMM6
thanks logan x
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on August 17, 2014
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on August 17, 2014
getsherlock
Please keep woting
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getsherlock
I mean writing
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MMMMMMM6
there you go. Hope you like the new chapters!
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on August 14, 2014
getsherlock
love the new ones, keep writing please
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on July 07, 2014
getsherlock
more more more more :D please
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on July 07, 2014
logan432
I love your new chapters babe :)
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on June 25, 2014
MMMMMMM6
I'm so glad people like my story :) I'll add a new chapter!
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on June 16, 2014
logan432
The new chapters are so good!
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on June 03, 2014
logan432
This is such a great story Maddy! I hope it helps u to write this kind of stuff out.
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on May 31, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
Write more soon!
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on May 26, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
OMG PLEASE write more! This is really good!
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on May 25, 2014