The Sound of Revenge

The Sound of Revenge

I wrote this story a while ago but really want to share it. I will update it regularly so please mark it as a favourite story so you won't miss out. Writing this really helped me get out my emotions into the story. PLEASE READ!

published on May 24, 2014132 reads 11 readers 13 not completed
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Chapter 14.

Plunging to my death

“Laura, I’m really sorry. That was harsh. I actually really understand” I apologised to Laura.
“It’s ok. Let’s just have a good time!” She shouted as she got up off the couch and started dancing.
She was right too. This was the perfect place that I could have fun and forget about Jarrod and all the problems that followed. I went off in another direction to some people dancing in a group. The music was louder there so it was easier for me to dance to the right beat.
“Hey!” I heard a guy shouting behind me.
I figured he wasn’t talking to me and continued on dancing. I started to notice people were thinning out and less people were dancing around me. I sensed someone staring at me.
Oh maybe it’s a guy checking me out, I thought to myself and continued on dancing.
“Miss!” A male voice shouted from behind me. That time it was definitely aimed at me. I turned around. A really cute guy and a couple of his friends were standing right there, looking at me as if I had killed someone.
“Don’t move” the guy said. He looked serious so I just did as he said.
“I don’t want to scare you but there is a crack in the floor about a metre from you. A lady smashed the glass with one of her stilettoes. If you move, chances are the crack will spread and you will be cut by the glass” he said.
So much for not scaring me.
“So what do I do?” I asked in the bravest voice I could manage.
“Just hold on a sec.” As he said this he picked up a piece of wood that was lying next to him. He obviously had a plan. Thank the Lord! Trust me to get into such a situation. The smart less clumsy people (everyone except me) were on the edges of the dance floor and in the lounge. I spotted Laura and Leo staring at the ground on which I was standing on. The guy put the board of wood onto the dance floor and began to slowly step up on it.
“Here” he said holding out his hand. I went to grab it but just as I did the crack in the floor, CRACKED!
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logan432
Great writing babe
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MMMMMMM6
thanks logan x
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on August 17, 2014
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on August 17, 2014
getsherlock
Please keep woting
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getsherlock
I mean writing
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MMMMMMM6
there you go. Hope you like the new chapters!
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on August 17, 2014
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on August 14, 2014
getsherlock
love the new ones, keep writing please
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on July 07, 2014
getsherlock
more more more more :D please
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on July 07, 2014
logan432
I love your new chapters babe :)
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on June 25, 2014
MMMMMMM6
I'm so glad people like my story :) I'll add a new chapter!
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on June 16, 2014
logan432
The new chapters are so good!
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on June 03, 2014
logan432
This is such a great story Maddy! I hope it helps u to write this kind of stuff out.
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on May 31, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
Write more soon!
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on May 26, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
OMG PLEASE write more! This is really good!
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on May 25, 2014