Falling For You (1)

Falling For You (1)

Sesa was the most popular person in town, even for an emo. Sports car, social butterfly, caring family, friends aplenty. Then he met Elise, his polar opposite: A POS car, a single dad at his wits end, anti-social, and only her adoptive sister Akiko to call on. Who knows what will happen when they finaly admit to being in love with each other?

published on May 12, 201780 reads 13 readers 84 completed
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Chapter 2.
Emo

Emo

Elise sat behind Sesa, near the front of the class.

The girl behind her wrote a note, then poked her and asked, "Hand this to Sesa."
She nods, then stops cold when she sees the heart on it.
Should she just crumble it up?
COULD she crumble it up?

She shakily pokes Sesa, whimpering as he turned around. She was so scaredhe might think she was-
He looks ather, the most gentle look in his eyes, melting her fears and worries instantly.
"From... Uh... Okata..." she says quietly, letting out a small, almsot unnoticable smile.

Sesa frowned a little, seemingly a little disapointed.
Damn. He thought, taking it and reading yet another love letter. Here I thought she would give me it.

Elise sighed, knowing she lost as he writes something down and hands it to her behind his back.
She handed the note to Okata, ready to give up when she heard her whisper to herself, "Are you serious? Why her?!" making her tense up a little.

Who was she talking about?

Okata poked Elise, nearly shoving it in her face.
She opened the note, reading:
Why does he have a crush on you? Youre not even pretty!

Elise's jaw dropped, blushing as she stuttered for words.
The bell rang, and Sesa stood up when he noticed the note in her hand.
He leaned in, reading it and blushing intensly, looking at Elise. She was blushing as well, and her eyes darted from him to the note and back.

Sesa took a deep breath, then said in front of everyone, "Listen up, cause Im only going to say this once."
Everyone froze, ready to hear the popular boy out.
"Elise Akito..." he says, getting on his knees and taking her hands in his, "Will you marry me?"
Elise smiles, then says, "Hell yeah." as she-

"Elise!" Akiko says, slamming her hands on her sisters table and making her squeek again.
"The bell rang." Akiko states, sighing and walking out of the door.
Elise sighed.
She had day dreamed.
Again.

Sesa shook his head, watching the shy girl leave.
One day, he'd ask her out.
If only she actually liked him.
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The_Mad_Hatress
Great story!!!!!!!
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on October 04, 2017
TylerWay
Plot twist!!! YEAH!!!
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xXEmo_KingXx
Also making a new story
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xXEmo_KingXx
Now shes the one with the bad attitude
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on May 16, 2017
TylerWay
okay!
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on May 16, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
K! Brb!
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on May 16, 2017
TylerWay
Yep, yandere is always the answer
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on May 16, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Idk yet. Definately romance though. And yandere. Always yandere
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on May 16, 2017
TylerWay
What is it about???!!
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on May 16, 2017
TylerWay
That was nice. Akiko and Bana, so cute
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xXEmo_KingXx
^-^
Ttyl
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TylerWay
Okay!!!
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on May 15, 2017
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on May 15, 2017
TylerWay
Three whole days
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on May 15, 2017
TylerWay
But the tomorrow has to come
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xXEmo_KingXx
Que?
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on May 15, 2017
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on May 15, 2017
TylerWay
SHE IS MOVING AWAY NNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
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xXEmo_KingXx
Eats popcorn*
What could happen next?
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TylerWay
Then it is a magnificent idea
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on May 15, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
The page you subscribed to.
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on May 15, 2017
TylerWay
What could this magnificent idea be? O-o
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on May 15, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Bows*
I have an idea
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on May 15, 2017
TylerWay
Welcome! @xXEmo_KingXx
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on May 15, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
And back
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on May 15, 2017
TylerWay
okay!
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on May 15, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
XD
Lunch brb
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on May 15, 2017
TylerWay
HOW YOU KNOW?????
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xXEmo_KingXx
Voooodooooooo
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TylerWay
XD @xXEmo_KingXx
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on May 15, 2017
TylerWay
I'll tell you.......MAGIC
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xXEmo_KingXx
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How..?!? Thats what I was planing!!!
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on May 15, 2017
TylerWay
They fall deeply in love, and then one day, Elise disappears. And Sesa doesn't know where she is, so he looks for her desperately.
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on May 15, 2017
TylerWay
Maybe she moves so Sesa follows her?
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SierraMWay
can u plz write more i rlly like ur stories me and my friend @TylerWay r addicted to them can u plz add more chapters to this one and Obsesion?
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TylerWay
I AM AN ADDICT TO THESE STORIES!!!! YEP THAT'S RIGHT PEOPLES!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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SierraMWay
YASSSSSSSS
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on May 15, 2017
TylerWay
TWINS!!!!!!!!!
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on May 15, 2017
SierraMWay
I am too tyler my amazing twin we need more of these!!
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xXEmo_KingXx
Maybe Ill write a second Obsession...
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SierraMWay
thank you so much @xXEmo_KingXx we love ur stories and this new one will be great
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on May 15, 2017
TylerWay
Yayayayayayayayyaayayayayayayayayayayayayayayay
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xXEmo_KingXx
Ok, ok, after I finish up Falling For You
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SierraMWay
plz do u know u will have mine and @TylerWay read it so plz write some more
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xXEmo_KingXx
Maybe.
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SierraMWay
yasssssss plz
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on May 15, 2017
TylerWay
DDDDDDDDDOOOOOOOOOOO IIIIIIIIITTTTT
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on May 15, 2017
SierraMWay
yess plz do
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TylerWay
Romeo an Juliet?
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xXEmo_KingXx
Kinda
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TylerWay
OH NOOOOOOOOOO.
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on May 15, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Evil laugh*
Juuust wait.
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on May 15, 2017
TylerWay
Evil laughs???? What could this mean!!!!!
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xXEmo_KingXx
Hehbe
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on May 15, 2017
TylerWay
NIce!
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on May 15, 2017
TylerWay
So much love!
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TylerWay
And Sesa asked her to marry him, so far this is a great romance story! @xXEmo_KingXx
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TylerWay
YOU WROTE THE CHAPTER YYYYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
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TheBrokenMemories
DUDE
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TheBrokenMemories
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
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on May 12, 2017
TylerWay
Once again. Lol
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on May 12, 2017
TheBrokenMemories
Yep.................
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on May 12, 2017
TylerWay
So many lols given
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on May 12, 2017
TheBrokenMemories
IT'S ZIANA TYLER
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on May 12, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
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TylerWay
I ask that everyday @a.amaducci1122
and XD too @xXEmo_KingXx
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TheBrokenMemories
WHHHHHHHHHHHYYYYYYYYYYYY
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on May 12, 2017
TylerWay
Okay I will.
*dying from happiness on inside*
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xXEmo_KingXx
Lol chill
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TylerWay
SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO HHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPYYYYYYY
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TheBrokenMemories
EMO!!!
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TheBrokenMemories
I'm happy to see you!
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TheBrokenMemories
Meet you there my sweet!
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on May 12, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Of course.
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on May 12, 2017
TheBrokenMemories
NM, you? Wanna chat in "For us"?
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on May 12, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Dont know.
Anyways, whats up?
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on May 12, 2017
TheBrokenMemories
Why should I be MAD at you?
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TheBrokenMemories
What's wrong?
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xXEmo_KingXx
I thought you would be angry at me...
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xXEmo_KingXx
Uh oh...
Hey, @a.amaducci1122
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