Don't cry tonight (Old)

Don't cry tonight (Old)

A backstory of my creepypasta character; Night cry. Warning;if you don't like gore, don't read this! Here's the first 3 chapters! ill be writing more on Friday to Sunday.

published on February 13, 201542 reads 14 readers 7 completed
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Chapter 5.
Bloody Tears Of A Child (part 1)

Bloody Tears Of A Child (part 1)

The young girl is now 13. After all the surgery she's
found a new family. Her last name is changed from
Potter to Jin. Lilly Ambrosine-Mackenzie Jin,
or Lilly A.M Jin, that's her new name.

-I have a new family, a new sister, a new mom, and
dad........Everything is perfect.......Just perfect!-

----------Lilly's P.O.V.----------

I'm sitting on my bed eating a carton of rice,watching
a scary; Jason movie, and doodling a bit on a spare
piece of paper, I had laying in my room.
Multitasking was easy for me. In fact it was better for me. Multitasking got me straight "A's". To my surprise drawing was my special talent. I loved drawing everything.

Then my sister came in.
She just stood there, not moving at all. I paused my
movie.

~Ummm.....do you mind. You can clearly see I'm
watching a movie here!~

She still didn't move. I saw she was lightly
moving her foot in a circle, and was looking at the floor.
That's how she tells me there was something wrong.

I calmed myself down and asked her what was wrong.

~Hey Alvara what's wrong?~

Still she said nothing. I yelled at her.

~HEY IF YOU WON'T TALK THEN I CAN'T HELP YOU!~

She looked up, she had a worried look and tears
in her eyes. I stopped and set down my pencil.

~Alava, what happened.~

Alava was my sister. She was two years older then me. She always been a bit spoiled, and a bit of a baby, I loved her, sometimes I hated her but I know I'll need her in my life. I don't what everything to happen to her....not like last time.

~D-do you t-think mum a-and dad are g-going to get   
d-divorced!~

After she said this, she cried even harder, she rested her head on my shoulder. Was I supposed to comfort her?
I really didn't know, so I just put my hands around her, and softly whispered.

~Your being crazy big sis. they'll never get divorced.~

The next day, it was the first day of school.
Lilly got up and went down stairs, where she found
her dad scanning the newspaper, her mom, washing
dishes, and her sister sitting on the couch.
Lilly walked over to Alava to see what she was doing.
She looked over to see her filling out a information
paper. The title was "The Retaliation Academy".

~ Why do we need to fill these out mum?~

~Because the school strictly says they need your information on you. It's to be safe.~

~But what if I don't what do fill it out!~

Her mother stopped washing the dishes, then turned round to face her daughter.

~If you don't you be locked up in the basement,
We don't want that. Your our "perfect" little angel, right.~

Lilly nodded in reply.

~Good dear! Now go get your uniform on, it's on your dresser!~

With her mother sounding happy and normal again,
she nodded again and went to her room.
On her dresser she spotted a white and blue uniform. There was a red bow on the front, a little blue cape-like collar, and a little blue skirt. The
uniform looked like a sailor outfit, she had to emit it was cute. Lilly have a weak smile and put it on.
    Lilly went back down stairs to show her parents.

~Hey mum, do you like it?~

Her mother turned to see. She smiled.

~Awww you look so cute baby doll!~

~mum seriously~

Lilly had her dark orange hair put up in a side ponytail, she put on her black and white shoes, with high white socks. Her sister and father turned to look too.

~Ha little sis. you look like a sailor on a boat. You want to clean the toilets from me?~

~Shut the hell up!~

Her dad smiled.

~Well I think to look a beautiful young girl.~

Lilly blushed.

~Thanks dad~

Here's some background knowledge....if you don't know what the hell Lilly's name means!

Mackenzie-Fire-born
Ambrosine-Immortal
Jin-gentleness

So in there meanings her names is;
Lilly immortal-fire born gentleness #lol
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Comments (7)

Kaleythecreepypasta
OH OH OH may I help Lunacrafted can I?Like maybe give you a couple of ideas or such?B)
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Lunacrafted
I love it!
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on December 02, 2015
Lunacrafted
Omg it's been forever since I've been on here. Yes, you can help but I've been planning to rewrite this.
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Kaleythecreepypasta
Okay maybe you could make the little girl a autistic creepypasta...except since she is little she doesn't know she's a creepypasta and she starts to see things but since shes autistic she jst thinks its her imagination but as she gets older she starts to hear them and feel them and things get a little more creepyier..................
DONT CRY TONIGHT(new)?
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on December 02, 2015
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on November 24, 2015
gothicskittlescupcake
SUCH AN AMAZING STORY!!!!!!!!!
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Lunacrafted
Thank u I feel so happy ahhhhh I worked so hard ahhhh:D
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on March 08, 2015
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Lunacrafted
The parents are NOT based off of harry potter
But the last name well....... I just like it
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on March 02, 2015