Don't cry tonight (Old)

Don't cry tonight (Old)

A backstory of my creepypasta character; Night cry. Warning;if you don't like gore, don't read this! Here's the first 3 chapters! ill be writing more on Friday to Sunday.

published on February 13, 201542 reads 14 readers 7 completed
show story details+
Chapter 4.
The day he lied to me

The day he lied to me

~My Lord Zolgo, are investors have indicated a explosion near a junk yard in California.~

~Do you really think I care about explosions that are happening on this wretched earth!~

~N-no my Lord.~

~Do you even remember what we're looking for?~

~y-yes, we are looking for monsters to take in and steal from the Slenderman.~

~Then why haven't you located even?!~

~W-we have located a young child near the explosion, but she severs no uses to us.~

~A young girl? Umm.... Let me have a look at her.~

~But surely she doesn't have even value to you?!~

~SILENCE!!!~

~alright sir, follow me.~

------Back on earth------

~ummm..... A bit too young, but maybe I can get close to her as a good friend and wait for her too grow up.~

~But that would take years sir.~

~I know, now you better go im going in my human stage.~

~sure thing my Lord.~

-The servant vanished-

The man so called Lord Zolgo started looking around.

----------Zolgo's P.O.V----------

~Umm...... A girl, young, sweet, and so gullible.~
~I bet I can make some uses out of her.~
I look over to the destroyed biluding, I pause a see a man's hand poking out.
~ummm...... A hand of a man umm....~
I walk over the were the hand is, I pick up the body by the hand.
The man had black spikie hair, a scars on his face, and
blood all over him.
~ummm.... Must have been the father,but where's the mother?~
I look over at the little girl.
~Umm.... Still knocked out.~
I throw the life less body to the side.
~ahhhh..... Here's the mother.~
I spot a woman's arm.
I pick her up from the bricks.
The woman had long orange hair, and a bloody hole in the front of her head.
~ouch, that must have been bad!~
I set the body down and check on the kid, if she had awoken.
~Not awake yet, geez~

----------Lilly's P.O.V----------

I fell so weak.....w-what happen?
Where mom and dad?
Why did I black out?
I need to move.....
I turn over to my back.....I see a man, a man that unburied my dead parents.?
~ummm......who are you...and why did you unburie my parents?~
The man looked over to me..... He looked surprised.

~Oh god I didn't see you there little one, let me get you to a hospital !!!~

Then the man pick me up gently and started to walk to a hospital.
During the walk, I noticed that the man had red eyes and pointed ears.
I thought It was funny well sense it wasn't Halloween.
I giggled at the sight of this.
The man looked down at me in a surprised reaction.

~Where almost there, and was's so funny?~

~y-you look l-like a vampier silly!~

I gave a weak smile.

~Oh do I, I never noticed.~

He smiled and blushed for a second as he and I walked in the hospital.

~ummm..... Miss I found this little girl near a biluding that exploded a while ago
I need you to see if she's ok soon as possible.~

The woman at the desk look angry, she was huge woman with short curly brown hair,and glasses.
The woman look up from her book and looked at me.
The woman's face then looked horrified.

~OH MY GOD!!! GIVE HER TO ME! DOCTORS, DOCTORS COME QUICK!~

Then three doctors came out with a rolling hospital bed.

~Your going to be okay little girl.~

One of the doctors said.

In my opinion I felt fine, but then I looked at mt body,
it was covered with blood, burns, and bruises.

-Ahhhhhh what the heck! How the heck did this happen!-

I was screaming I my head, but I didn't what to make the doctors lose there
focuse so I justed started to cry.

----------a few seconds later----------

My vision was blacking out again, I couldn't move.
The doctors moved me to a operation table for kids.
I saw them. They had tools, I knew they could help me.
I blacked out.......
Join Qfeast to read the entire story!
Sign In. It is absolutely free!
5.0
Please Rate:
5.0 out of 5 from 1 user
Be the first to add this story to favorites
▼Scroll down for more stories

Comments (7)

Kaleythecreepypasta
OH OH OH may I help Lunacrafted can I?Like maybe give you a couple of ideas or such?B)
reply
Lunacrafted
I love it!
reply
Report
on December 02, 2015
Lunacrafted
Omg it's been forever since I've been on here. Yes, you can help but I've been planning to rewrite this.
reply
Kaleythecreepypasta
Okay maybe you could make the little girl a autistic creepypasta...except since she is little she doesn't know she's a creepypasta and she starts to see things but since shes autistic she jst thinks its her imagination but as she gets older she starts to hear them and feel them and things get a little more creepyier..................
DONT CRY TONIGHT(new)?
what See More▼
reply
Report
on December 02, 2015
Report
on December 02, 2015
Report
on November 24, 2015
gothicskittlescupcake
SUCH AN AMAZING STORY!!!!!!!!!
reply
Lunacrafted
Thank u I feel so happy ahhhhh I worked so hard ahhhh:D
reply
Report
on March 08, 2015
Report
on March 08, 2015
Lunacrafted
The parents are NOT based off of harry potter
But the last name well....... I just like it
reply
Report
on March 02, 2015