Don't cry tonight (Old)

Don't cry tonight (Old)

A backstory of my creepypasta character; Night cry. Warning;if you don't like gore, don't read this! Here's the first 3 chapters! ill be writing more on Friday to Sunday.

published on February 13, 201542 reads 14 readers 7 completed
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Chapter 6.
Bloody Tears Of A Child (part 2)

Bloody Tears Of A Child (part 2)

It's the first day at middle school.
Lilly and Alava said there goodbye's and headed off to school. A couple of minutes in to there walk, Lilly got that weird feeling, that feeling she hadn't felt in years. That weird feeling when mom and dad died.
She sighed, she ignored it and set her goal to make some friends at school. She didn't know how it's was going to be like, the problem was, Lilly wasn't that good at English. When she was little she lived in Japan with her birth parents. At age four, her parents and her moved back to America. Thinking all about this she wondered if she could fit in, she knew most of the English words and was very good at speaking in the language but.... How would the other kids react to her if she spoke Japanese on accident?
Well they probably wouldn't care.....right?!

~At least Alava backs me up.......~

~ Uhh....what did you say?~

Alava looked at Lilly in confusion like she said something stupid.

~oh..... nothing...~

Alava smiled.

~Let me guess, you're worried about your first day at school?~

I quickly lied to her.
~uhhhh......yeah I hope it isn't bad~

Her smile grew even brighter.

~don't worry I'll be there for you sis.....always there!~

By her saying that Lilly felt better as they got to the school gates. But there's was something wrong, no one was there! Alava checked her watch.

~ Oh my god! We're late!~

~ We are? What's the time.~

~ We need to go! It's 9:47, schools started at 9:00! This is what happens when you spend seven thousand hours in the bathroom!~

~I DON'T SPEND SEVEN THOUSAND HOURS IN THE BATHROOM!!! YOUR THE ONE WHO HOGS THE BATHROOM WHEN I NEED IT!!!~

Alava grabbed Lilly's hand and blasted through the school door. A plus was the class they started in was on the third floor of the school building! They shot up the stairs. They were running up the last flight of stairs, in till Lilly tripped on one of the stairs and fell from her grasp of her sister's hand, falling made her get the wind knocked out of her, falling down head first down the stairs at a fast rate. Alava looked back to see her sister at the bottom of the stairs, knocked out with blood in the back of her head.
~ LILLY!!!~

-----Lilly's P.O.V.-----

All I remembered that day was........w-was I-I was
l-late on the first day of school w-with my s-sister, then.... t-then I tripped and a-and I-I fell and bashed m-my head on t-the stairs and fell to the bottom of the s-stairs...... That's all I remember...... When I woke up I f-found myself in a-a hospital bed, and hooked up t-to a air mask.

Lilly's vision was blurry. She shook it off to make her vision better for her to see. Her body was heavy, her breath was slow and calm. She looked to her right, she saw a heart rate monitor and plastic bag with blood in it, the bag was connected to needles that was in her arm, and a air mask that was on her mouth. She sat up, there was a strong stingy feeling in the back of her head. She reached to feel her head, then the needles fell out and on to the floor.
A nurse then came in and grabbed her arm and set it back on the bed and put the needles back in.
~ Try not to move this arm.~

I stuttered a bit.
~ Umm m-ma'am w-what happened w-with my my
head?~

When I asked the question she looked a bit worried.

~ Oh that.....you just fell down and hit your head and lost a bit of blood....nothing too major honey.~

~Oh.....~

The nurse smiled and walked out. That nurse..........
she lying I just knew she was! Then that feeling came again, the one feeling Lilly felt earlier. Man that's is getting really annoying. She said in her head. She shook the feeling away and laid back down.
What felt like a minute of sleep, Lilly was woken up by a dream. She opened her eyes, and sat up.
That image.....I've seen it before, in another dream.
A man in a tuxedo.....a man with no face!
Then a doctor came in. He had sleek brown hair, that was parted to the side, he had to freckles below his right eye. He closed the door behind him. He sat down on the bed, with his clipboard in hand.
~ Let's take that air mask off~
He took the air mask off of my mouth, and continued to talk.

~ How are you doing, feeling better yet?~

He smiled. By him saying that, I asked him about what really happened to my head.

~ Umm..... Y-yes but.....That nurse t-that came in~

~ Yes, what about her?~

~ S-she l-lied to m-me....~

~ About what sweetie?~

~ W-what happened w-with my head-d?~

He looked surprised at the question, but continued to smile.

~ Well, your sisters said that.....that....~

He stopped, then surprisingly he stopped smiling.

~ Do you remember what happened after you fell from the second fight of stairs?~

To my surprise, I did remember a bit of what happened.

~ Y-yeah,well j-just a bit of what-what h-happened.~

He laid a hand on my shoulder.

~ When you fell, you know you could have died.~

~ S-so what's y-your point-t~
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Kaleythecreepypasta
OH OH OH may I help Lunacrafted can I?Like maybe give you a couple of ideas or such?B)
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Lunacrafted
I love it!
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on December 02, 2015
Lunacrafted
Omg it's been forever since I've been on here. Yes, you can help but I've been planning to rewrite this.
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Kaleythecreepypasta
Okay maybe you could make the little girl a autistic creepypasta...except since she is little she doesn't know she's a creepypasta and she starts to see things but since shes autistic she jst thinks its her imagination but as she gets older she starts to hear them and feel them and things get a little more creepyier..................
DONT CRY TONIGHT(new)?
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on November 24, 2015
gothicskittlescupcake
SUCH AN AMAZING STORY!!!!!!!!!
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Lunacrafted
Thank u I feel so happy ahhhhh I worked so hard ahhhh:D
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Lunacrafted
The parents are NOT based off of harry potter
But the last name well....... I just like it
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on March 02, 2015