City Kids

Foxuaje (Fox-WAYj) Clements is a boy running from the police. He plans to hide in Spaksar so they don't find him. He meets a stranger and is thrown into chaos that is home to the City Kids. Enjoy.

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City Kids
Chapter 2.

Chapter Two

Fox walked through the streets of the city before thinking about what Piv had said about how he was easy to see. He pulled out 5 Shajs (Currency). ‘It’s worth a try.’ He thought as he walked into a store and looked through the clothes. He found a T-Shirt and some jeans that looked alright and took them to the counter.
“Thank you sir.” He held out the crumpled Shajs but the cashier woman said,
“Oh no, that young man over there has already paid for your purchase.” She gestured towards a boy in a black leather jacket leaning against the wall. Fox thanked the woman and went to change. When he came out, he walked over to the boy.
“Hey,” He said, The boy said nothing. “Thanks for doing that, you don’t know how much it means to me.”
“Yes, I do.” He said,
“Excuse me?” Fox asked, The boy sighed and stuck out his hand.
“Vpauw (vu-pow) Drew, call me Pow.” Fox took his hand.
“Foxuaje Clements, Call me Fox. Now what did you say?” Pow smirked at him. His hair was matted and pitch black. Unlike Piv, who had wavy blonde hair. His cheek bones were very sharp and he looked quite attractive. Piv had a more soft complexion but her mischievous look canceled out the innocence.
“I know how much it means to you. You really needed a disguise.” Fox narrowed his eyes, why was hiding so difficult?
“How do you know that?”
“I can’t say here. Cops are everywhere.” Fox looked around It was true, that there were many policeman around. Fox gritted his teeth with annoyance,
“Then let’s talk somewhere else.” Pow shrugged, walking from the store into the park outside.
“So, first thing’s first. I know that you’re on the run from the cops. So a disguise would be necessary. Second, you were wearing poor clothes which means it’s probably a problem concerning money, maybe you stole something with more value that you thought and now you’re on the run.” Pow started, Fox cut him off.
“I didn’t steal anything. The government was going to blow up my village if I hadn’t done something.”
“Ah, so you stopped a maniacal plan.” Pow said, “I’m impressed, a little more than I would’ve expected from a poor fellow.”
“Now listen here, just because I don’t have that much money doesn’t mean that I can’t make a difference.”
“Of course it doesn’t.” Fox heard from behind him. He turned and was surprised to see Piv.
“Piv! I thought the cops caught you.” Piv made eye-contact with Pow and they burst out laughing.
“The cops? Catch her?” Pow said and he continued to laugh.
“That never happens.” Piv said. Fox was confused,
“Wait, you two know each other?” Piv snorted with laughter.
“When you have a twin brother, you probably have met at least a few times.” Fox looked at Pow,
“You said your name was Pow Drew.” Piv gave Pow a ‘not amused’ face and said,
“His last name is Johnson.”
“Now that you aren’t very likely to be recognised, we can go to the base. Follow us.” Piv and Pow began walking away.
“Where are we going?” Fox asked, Piv smirked,
“To the home of the City Kids.”

Hi, Sorry I'm 100 words shorter than last time, I need to end it at the right times so that it doesn't sound weirder than it already does.  I'm so happy that this is a liked story and I know I sound cheesy but I was so fricking happy when I saw this was good so thank you.
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ThatRandomGirl33
Awesome!
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QuinnWalker
Thank you
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ThatRandomGirl33
no prob
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vive_la_revolution
Must have more!! :D
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QuinnWalker
I'd be happy to post more.
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vive_la_revolution
Amazing!
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BasicCactus
This is really good.
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GalacticBiRavenclaw
This was a pretty good story. I would work a bit more on the punctuation, though. However, it's suspenseful and I'd be interested in reading more! Good job! :D
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QuinnWalker
Thanks, I'll look over the punctuation.
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