just poems and stuff and random sayings

self explanatory I am new at stories soo please save the criticism for later

published on May 18, 201433 reads 12 readers 5 not completed
Chapter 1.

Lonely Flower

I am just a flower in a field of roses. I don't stand out that much and the other roses barely notice me except for the few surrounding me. I try my best to keep them smiling while I slowly wilt away. I eventually die off and only a few of them even realize I am gone. Eventually new roses grow in my place and I am forgotten. Nobody will ever remember the flower that tried its best to keep the other roses happy. But that doesn't matter cause the flower is happy that it could at least help so it accepts its fate in drowning in the field of happy smiling roses.
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Frostgoddess
You're really good at writing poetry. and expressing emotion through poetry. (I wish I could help you.....)
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on August 01, 2014
Elleyd
I see you. I see the little girl who needs help and you know my hand is always outstretched for you.
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on June 13, 2014
Parabolic
to*
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on May 25, 2014
Parabolic
don't you dare kill yourself, there is no reason for it! when there is nothing but darkness there is always light co brighten the world around you!
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on May 25, 2014
Elleyd
I would cry if you died... Please don't think this about yourself.
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on May 18, 2014