Just Poems And Stuff

self explanatory~ this is just a place I type down random thoughts and the like for all the see~ feel free to comment as it shows at least some people are interested~

published on May 18, 201467 reads 18 readers 5 not completed
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Chapter 5.

Reflect

As you look into a mirror, what do you see? What are you exactly to yourself... You see a happy face in the mirror but behind it a shadow. Your true self, the one you repress. The one who desires to cry and let the world know just how much it has tortured you. This shadow will never fade no matter how hard you try to hide it. What is the point, for others happiness? What about your happiness? A flash in the mirror, a knife held up to your neck, who is it's wielder? Why... It's none other than yourself. Sacrifices have to be made, you can't make everyone happy. What does your reflection see... A smiling face with tears running down it's cheeks... Crying as you mentally kill yourself for the ones you love.... What do you see...
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Frostgoddess
You're really good at writing poetry. and expressing emotion through poetry. :( (I wish I could help you.....)
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on August 01, 2014
Elleyd
I see you. I see the little girl who needs help and you know my hand is always outstretched for you.
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on June 13, 2014
Paraboilc
to*
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on May 25, 2014
Paraboilc
don't you dare kill yourself, there is no reason for it! when there is nothing but darkness there is always light co brighten the world around you!
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on May 25, 2014
Elleyd
:(( I would cry if you died... Please don't think this about yourself.
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on May 18, 2014