Just Poems And Stuff

self explanatory~ this is just a place I type down random thoughts and the like for all the see~ feel free to comment as it shows at least some people are interested~

published on May 18, 201467 reads 18 readers 5 not completed
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Chapter 4.

Drowning

I just wanted to go for a swim, I wanted to swim in the happiness of my friends. instead I end up drowning in the depths of there hatred. my tears only add to the liquid that's covering my body. I try to speak words but all people hear is the silence of a girl sinking. Nobody diving into the pool of sorrow to save her. no helping hands to pull her out. just the darkness of water and sadness can be seen as the liquid fills her lungs. one last breath...
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Frostgoddess
You're really good at writing poetry. and expressing emotion through poetry. :( (I wish I could help you.....)
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on August 01, 2014
Elleyd
I see you. I see the little girl who needs help and you know my hand is always outstretched for you.
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on June 13, 2014
Paraboilc
to*
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on May 25, 2014
Paraboilc
don't you dare kill yourself, there is no reason for it! when there is nothing but darkness there is always light co brighten the world around you!
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on May 25, 2014
Elleyd
:(( I would cry if you died... Please don't think this about yourself.
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on May 18, 2014