Rise of the burning man.

A D&D story, has a few weird twists but you will make sense of it eventually. This story is also done with my Co-author Dungeon_Master, so if you want the prelude and afterwards, read his story "Blood of dragons"

published on July 29, 201516 reads 9 readers 45 completed
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Rise of the burning man.
Chapter 4.

The First Trial.

I went to the militia barracks, where every able bodied person was preparing for the impending invasion. I go around looking for some strong people, up close and personal fighters, I was passing the dueling arena and I see a match progressing, so I decide to go and watch. In the arena one of the men is fighting a girl, who I came to learn as Anna.
She swung her massive glaive with ease, parrying and blocking the mans attacks like it was nothing but a pesky goblin. He fainted to the left then struck out to the right with a dagger. But Anna just spun her glaive with one hand then sent a jaw shattering punch with her other. The man just stood there for a second, then his eyes rolled into the back of his head and he dropped to the ground like a sack of potatoes. I stare awe-struck as Anna carries the man over to the medical tent where the clerics look after him.  
I walk up to her, noticing the lean and powerful muscles that just further the reason I need her. "Hello, my names Natasha. That was some amazing fighting skills back there" She shuffles uncomfortably, "Thanks, I train a lot. My names Annastasia, but you can call me Anna." "I am trying to form up a team of elite fighters and archers to fight against the rising tide when they come for Solaris, I saw your skills back there and I was hoping you would join up and be our forward fighter." She ponders for a bit, resting her chin on the butt of the glaive. She looks back up at me and says "Ok, I'll do it" She grins at me and I smile back, knowing that my team will have a better chance of living, maybe.
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Kitsunee
Wazzup @Goldmoon
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on September 10, 2015
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Now.
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on September 03, 2015
Kitsunee
next xhapter will be up in a min
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on September 03, 2015
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YOUR NINE! NO GORE OR SMEXY PARTS FOR YOU!
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on September 03, 2015
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@Goldmoon I am here
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on September 03, 2015
Kitsunee
Hello? Is it me your looking for? I can see it in your eyes. I can see it in your smile.
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on September 03, 2015
Kitsunee
hello!
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on August 23, 2015
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Sorry, computer mega lagging
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on August 22, 2015
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Don't worry @Dawnstar. I got your back
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on August 22, 2015
Kitsunee
Hello friend
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on August 22, 2015
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@Dawnstar
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on August 22, 2015
Kitsunee
Why must this happen
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on August 17, 2015
Kitsunee
I live
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on August 17, 2015
Kitsunee
I HAVE RISEN
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on August 14, 2015
Kitsunee
I is here.
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on August 07, 2015
Kitsunee
Me ok!
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on August 06, 2015
Kitsunee
dag nabbit
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on August 06, 2015
Kitsunee
Oh, So I am now alive and you be dead, an annoying conundrum.
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on August 06, 2015
Kitsunee
You seen the new chapters ;)
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on August 06, 2015
Kitsunee
Me no dead :P
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on August 06, 2015
Kitsunee
Just woke up. I'm alive :P
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on August 06, 2015
Kitsunee
See ya.
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on August 05, 2015
Kitsunee
Time for bed eh?
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on August 05, 2015
Kitsunee
Nice
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on August 05, 2015
Kitsunee
Awesome
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on August 05, 2015
Kitsunee
Wait till chapter four, things start getting actiony
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on August 05, 2015
Kitsunee
No, but I have won a few comps
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on August 05, 2015
Kitsunee
Hehehe, trust me, there is plenty more to come
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on August 05, 2015
Kitsunee
Wasn't finnished, read it again
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on August 05, 2015
Kitsunee
Yeah, thought I'd give ya a bit more
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on August 05, 2015
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