Rise of the burning man.

A D&D story, has a few weird twists but you will make sense of it eventually. This story is also done with my Co-author Dungeon_Master, so if you want the prelude and afterwards, read his story "Blood of dragons"

published on July 29, 201516 reads 9 readers 45 completed
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Rise of the burning man.
Chapter 3.

Dissaperance

As I meandered towards the tower I decide to take a scenic tour of the city to see what has changed. The market place is bigger, and the temple is more crowded than ever, but all in all, it is the same. I see the tower ahead and stop myself in awe and amazement, and as I stare at it a apprentice comes over and taps me on the shoulder, "Are you Natasha Ninelives?" "Aye, are you here to guide me around the tower?" I ask him, he looks edgy, like something is after him, He looks around and shuffles his feet, "No, I am here to show you the basics of sorcery, and to make sure you don't melt the tower. Let us be off" And he scurried off to the tower without another word.
As I walk in I feel the tell tale tingling feeling of a magic portal, and it is bigger on the inside, on the outside it looks thin and tall, while the inside is wide and I can see multiple planets outside the windows, and I feel at home here.
I trained with magic every day, with the apprentice whom I learned was called Galen, and learnt how to control my magic and my draconic abilities. I had been there for what seemed to be by my count 3 months, by then my training as an acolyte was complete and my days of an apprentice were completely turned around when the arch-mage went missing from the tower.
The days flew by, mages using all sorts of divination spells to try find him, sending out planar scouts of both angels and demons alike. I could not do much around the tower. During the chaos I heard that Lunaris had fell from the rising tide, and as I listened to the news, I new, deep within my soul Solaris was next, and that it would need to prepare for the devastation.
I started my training with the militia again, gaining the form I once had in my youth. I pushed myself to the best of my abilities in the morning with weapons and light armour, while making sure I practiced my magic in the evening. I would be ready for when they come, but I will need a team, a party, a friend.
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Kitsunee
Wazzup @Goldmoon
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on September 10, 2015
Kitsunee
Now.
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on September 03, 2015
Kitsunee
next xhapter will be up in a min
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on September 03, 2015
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YOUR NINE! NO GORE OR SMEXY PARTS FOR YOU!
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on September 03, 2015
Kitsunee
@Goldmoon I am here
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on September 03, 2015
Kitsunee
Hello? Is it me your looking for? I can see it in your eyes. I can see it in your smile.
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on September 03, 2015
Kitsunee
hello!
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on August 23, 2015
Kitsunee
Sorry, computer mega lagging
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on August 22, 2015
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Don't worry @Dawnstar. I got your back
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on August 22, 2015
Kitsunee
Hello friend
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on August 22, 2015
Kitsunee
@Dawnstar
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on August 22, 2015
Kitsunee
Why must this happen
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on August 17, 2015
Kitsunee
I live
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on August 17, 2015
Kitsunee
I HAVE RISEN
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on August 14, 2015
Kitsunee
I is here.
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on August 07, 2015
Kitsunee
Me ok!
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on August 06, 2015
Kitsunee
dag nabbit
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on August 06, 2015
Kitsunee
Oh, So I am now alive and you be dead, an annoying conundrum.
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on August 06, 2015
Kitsunee
You seen the new chapters ;)
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on August 06, 2015
Kitsunee
Me no dead :P
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on August 06, 2015
Kitsunee
Just woke up. I'm alive :P
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on August 06, 2015
Kitsunee
See ya.
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on August 05, 2015
Kitsunee
Time for bed eh?
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on August 05, 2015
Kitsunee
Nice
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on August 05, 2015
Kitsunee
Awesome
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on August 05, 2015
Kitsunee
Wait till chapter four, things start getting actiony
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on August 05, 2015
Kitsunee
No, but I have won a few comps
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on August 05, 2015
Kitsunee
Hehehe, trust me, there is plenty more to come
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on August 05, 2015
Kitsunee
Wasn't finnished, read it again
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on August 05, 2015
Kitsunee
Yeah, thought I'd give ya a bit more
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on August 05, 2015
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