Rise of the burning man.

A D&D story, has a few weird twists but you will make sense of it eventually. This story is also done with my Co-author Dungeon_Master, so if you want the prelude and afterwards, read his story "Blood of dragons"

published on July 29, 201516 reads 9 readers 45 completed
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Rise of the burning man.
Chapter 5.

Longshot and Animals

I wander around some more and pass the archery range where people are practicing, there seem to be some fine eyes within the group but then I notice a half elf man, at least another 40 meters further from the target from the rest, hitting bulls eye after bulls eye with his bow. I saunter up to him, watching is arms tense and release as he shoots. "Can you do that to a moving target?" I ask, He turns to me, looking over me with keen elven eyes. "Who's askin'?" he replies, "Natasha Ninelives, pleasure to meet you." I hold out my hand, He grasps it in a warrior's grip "Ah, the sleeper girl.The names Allan, and I can shoot a rat from 100 paces at best" "Show me" And I levitate a helmet and place it around 80 paces away "Hit that" Before I even finish he fires an arrow at the helm, its iron head going right through the eye sockets and coming out the other side of the helm, its head sticking out of the other side.
I look to him in bewilderment, for I had never seen such marksmanship. "How would you like to be a the archer for a team that has a actual chance of surviving when the rising tide attacks?" He shoots at the target a few more times then turns to me. "Alright, but I have one condition"
I look at him quizzically, then motion for him to go on "My twin has to join us too." I look into his eyes and see a wall of defiance "What can she offer to the team?" "She is a druid, a rare things these days, and can call on nature for its strength, as well as heal like a priest" I think on this for a second, because while the tree lovers are not the best in combat, they can summon allies from the forests and such, and they can also heal. I look at him in the eye, "Welcome to you and your sister. What is her name?" I ask quickly "Her name is Allana" As I continue my search I laugh as I think about who I've recruited so far, Anna, Allan and Allana, the triple A combo. Next on my list is a sneaker, and after that I believe we would be ready.
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Kitsunee
Wazzup @Goldmoon
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on September 10, 2015
Kitsunee
Now.
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on September 03, 2015
Kitsunee
next xhapter will be up in a min
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on September 03, 2015
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YOUR NINE! NO GORE OR SMEXY PARTS FOR YOU!
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on September 03, 2015
Kitsunee
@Goldmoon I am here
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on September 03, 2015
Kitsunee
Hello? Is it me your looking for? I can see it in your eyes. I can see it in your smile.
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on September 03, 2015
Kitsunee
hello!
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on August 23, 2015
Kitsunee
Sorry, computer mega lagging
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on August 22, 2015
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Don't worry @Dawnstar. I got your back
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on August 22, 2015
Kitsunee
Hello friend
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on August 22, 2015
Kitsunee
@Dawnstar
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on August 22, 2015
Kitsunee
Why must this happen
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on August 17, 2015
Kitsunee
I live
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on August 17, 2015
Kitsunee
I HAVE RISEN
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on August 14, 2015
Kitsunee
I is here.
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on August 07, 2015
Kitsunee
Me ok!
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on August 06, 2015
Kitsunee
dag nabbit
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on August 06, 2015
Kitsunee
Oh, So I am now alive and you be dead, an annoying conundrum.
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on August 06, 2015
Kitsunee
You seen the new chapters ;)
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on August 06, 2015
Kitsunee
Me no dead :P
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on August 06, 2015
Kitsunee
Just woke up. I'm alive :P
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on August 06, 2015
Kitsunee
See ya.
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on August 05, 2015
Kitsunee
Time for bed eh?
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on August 05, 2015
Kitsunee
Nice
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on August 05, 2015
Kitsunee
Awesome
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on August 05, 2015
Kitsunee
Wait till chapter four, things start getting actiony
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on August 05, 2015
Kitsunee
No, but I have won a few comps
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on August 05, 2015
Kitsunee
Hehehe, trust me, there is plenty more to come
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on August 05, 2015
Kitsunee
Wasn't finnished, read it again
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on August 05, 2015
Kitsunee
Yeah, thought I'd give ya a bit more
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on August 05, 2015
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