From the Dead(Inspiration from a movie)

From the Dead(Inspiration from a movie)

Lauren Maldore is on the verge of being dead. A year ago, she was driving with her parents until a truck hit them. She was the only one who survived but now suffers from a deep, long coma. Many people have forgotten this. They even think she's dead. But only one has remembered to this day.(The picture I chose doesn't really relate to the story)

published on November 10, 201436 reads 17 readers 7 not completed
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Chapter 2.

Lauren learns the truth

OK, this has gotta be some sort of a prank. Lauren's DEAD. No way can she be in my apartment!!! Or maybe, maybe it's a ghost PRETENDING to be her...? Now I know I'm going crazy!

Lauren: "So you're still here...."
Daniel: "?!?!?!"

Lauren points to the cup of coffee I had this morning.

Lauren: "At least be a decent guest!!! Right over there are coasters! It wouldn't really kill you to get a coaster and place it UNDER the cup, will it?!"
Daniel: "Sheesh!!! Plus, what do you mean by this is your apartment???"
Lauren: "DUH!!! My parents and I live here!!!"
Daniel: "Nope. Not anymore."
Lauren: "WHAT DO YOU MEAN, 'NOT ANYMORE'?!?!?!"
Daniel: "Oh yeah- Try holding up the cup of coffee."
Lauren: T_T "Do you think I'm dumb or something?"
Daniel: "TRY."

Like last time, Lauren's hand goes past the cup. She waves her hand back and forth, into the cup.

Lauren: "What the heck....is going on....?"
Daniel: "Don't you remember anything....?"
Lauren: "....All I remember was living here with my parents and falling head over heals with someone..."
Daniel: "REALLY....?"
Lauren: "You're annoying!"
Daniel: "Says the one that can't remember anything."
Lauren: "Shush!!!"

Lauren tries to slap me but, of course, her hand goes right through me. Her hand then settles in the middle of my face.

Daniel: "Two words- HA HA."
Lauren: "UGH!!!" *wiggles her hand left and right of my face*
Daniel: "Ok....that tickles..."
Lauren: "...." *continues to do so*
Daniel: Ok stop.....
Lauren: *continues*
Daniel: T_T "Stop..."*places one of his hands through her stomach* "HA! How do you like that now?" *smirk*
Lauren: *looks down* "GRRRRRR!!!!!"

Lauren tries to push me, but then goes through me. It so happens that the window right behind me was open, so she fell out the window.

Lauren: "What the- AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!" *falls through the window*
Daniel: *sighs* FINALLY I can relax and not get disturbed by-
Lauren: I'M STILL HERE.
Daniel: *groans*
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CrystalWings
Entertaining
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Masubii_Chan
Thanks!!!:D
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AlwaysBeInfinite
Love the story! Very creative. <3
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Masubii_Chan
Thank you! :D
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Masubii_Chan
:):D
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AlwaysBeInfinite
You well deserved it! :D
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