From the Dead(Inspiration from a movie)

From the Dead(Inspiration from a movie)

Lauren Maldore is on the verge of being dead. A year ago, she was driving with her parents until a truck hit them. She was the only one who survived but now suffers from a deep, long coma. Many people have forgotten this. They even think she's dead. But only one has remembered to this day.(The picture I chose doesn't really relate to the story)

published on November 10, 201438 reads 16 readers 11 not completed
Chapter 1.

At Home

My name is Daniel, by the way. I haven't really got to know Lauren but somehow I can't stop thinking about her. Everyone has forgotten, even her best friends. Funny,the only time I have ever spoken to her was at the very last day she was alive. On that day, there was a rumor going on that she liked me, so I went straight up to her asked. She didn't say anything, though. All she did was widen her eyes and then ran away. After a year of her (maybe) death, I wouldn't really expect THIS to happen.

Daniel: Finally....Home....
???: "Hey! What are you doing in my apartment?! Get out unless you want to be in jail!!!"
Daniel: "Who the heck are you....?"

I swear...that person REALLY looks like Lauren....It would be really impossible for this person to be Lauren because Lauren's dead, right?

???: "Who the heck am I??? What about you?! You're the one who's barging into people's apartments thinking you own the place or something!!!"
Daniel: "Is your name....Lauren, perhaps?"
???: O.O "So you've gone from barging into apartments to being a stalker??? CREEPY!!!"
Daniel: T_T "Are you EVEN Lauren...?"

I wouldn't really expect Lauren to be like....THIS....

Lauren: "Of course my name is Lauren!!! How did you even get into this apartment?!"
Daniel: "It's called a KEY."
Lauren: "Whatever!!!"

Lauren tries to grab the phone but her hand slips right past it.

Lauren: "What the?!? WHAT did you DO to the phone???"
Daniel: "Ummm....Do you remember....I don't know....DYING?"
Lauren: "What kind of question is that??? I don't remember being sealed up in a coffin, covered in bugs if that's what you're asking!!!"
Daniel: "..."
Lauren: "Stay right there!!! I'm going to see if the other phone PROPERLY works!!!"

Lauren disappears into the other room, kind of like a ghost.
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planetfroot
*knows exactly what this story is from because omg its one of her favorite movies*
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Masubii_Chan
High five bruh.
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planetfroot
*Pokes your hand*
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sleepysuga
Haha! More!
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CrystalWings
Entertaining
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Masubii_Chan
Thanks!!!
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SwiftElementTheDarkHedgeWolf
Love the story! Very creative.
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Masubii_Chan
Thank you!
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SwiftElementTheDarkHedgeWolf
You well deserved it!
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