The Game of Life (Creepypasta)

Rewrote it... again. I know it really sucks balls, but I thought that this version would be better...

published on September 26, 201518 reads 14 readers 10 not completed

Hearing Things

I sat on the couch playing my favorite game, Ocarina of Time. Each time, a cucco attacked me, I wondered where the blood was. Suddenly, my DS died. I cursed under my breath as I plugged it in.  Meh. I guess it was time to hack the Wii. I walked over to the Wii, and used the remote to put in. A cheat code. Then, I was pulled into the screen. I enjoyed hacking things. It was  just... fun to me...
--THE NEXT . DAY--
As I walked down the hall to get to my middle school classroom, I heard a voice. "Oh, look! It's Link's girlfriend!" A voice shouted from behind me. Dante. I looked at the boy, annoyed at his joke. Dante grabbed my shirt by the collar. It was a graphic tee shirt with a picture of Ocarina of Time Link on it. "Why do you like that game? It's so old!" All I could do was fight back. "W- Well why do you like Mario so much? If I am correct, it's older than Zelda! Dante just let go of my shirt and walked away. I heard him say "Zelda Nerd" as he walked down the hall.
   I had hated Dante for as long as I knew him. He was rude, gross, popular, and just a plain old bitch.
Also, he hated Legend of Zelda, which I loved. He said that it was "Just some old elf romance game." Well, Mario is about a fat bully plumber that steals coins and tries to take the princess from someone who likes her. The next day, I lost it..
   Dante grabbed my phone. "FNAF 2? Who plays that!?!" I stared at him, annoyed. "I have already beaten mobile version on 20/20/20 mode.
Dante didn't believe me. He just flipped the bird at me and walked away. Before he was completely gone, I yelled, "Fuuck Off, Balloon Navi!"
   He didn't like that... Dante grabbed my shirt again, this time a Wind Waker themed graphic tee. "At least Mario doesn't look like a Powerpuff Girl!" He taunted. I heard a voice inside of my head. It sounded like "You're Broken. Fix yourself..." I saw Dante in a new light. Not as a heartless bully, but someone who would Regret bullying the hacker...
  Later that night, I sat down on the couch with my fully functional DS. Instead of just playing the game, I just tried to kill Navi. I don't know why, but I just wanted to kill her. Then, I heard it again... "Let me dominate you. I can fix you..." I was starting to get a little creeped out. Not knowing what to do, I just said, "Dominate me. I'm ready" Then, I was driven into Insanity be myself. I heard the voice again, this time I actually knew who it was. It was my dark side. "Bree, your hands", it whispered. I didn't want to hesitate. I looked down at my hands. "Are those... Freddy Kruger claws??"  I started getting confused with myself. "I let you possess me... How can I be possessed by myself!?! It doesn't make sense! That confusion just turned into anger. I screamed, "I AM NOT YOUR PUPPET!!!" At that moment, a flame shot out of my hand, casting an ominous light upon my claws. "Wait... Am I supposed to be........A killer!?!?
  My consciousness spoke again. "I fixed you. But I also broke you more... Go find your place in the world. With others, insane, lost, broken, and misunderstood...
  --TIME SKIP TO MIDNIGHT--
I knocked on the door. A few seconds later, a short boy in green answered the door. He looked exhausted. He eyed my DS. He looked at me again and said in a weak voice, "You must be the new pasta. You are a gamer. We will be best friends." The boy walked inside, and signaled me to follow. Then, he sat down on the couch. Then, he said, "I'm BEN. And I'm guessing that you are Glitchy BREE?" I nodded. BEN pulled his DS out of a case and began playing. I looked at BEN. "BEN, you should sleep more." I said. BEN looked at me. Then, he led me to a room with Sonic R pictures on the wall. In a bed, Bree could see two figures. One was a Fox doll with a bang and  light brown hair. The other was Tails Doll. Bree would see them in the morning. BEN walked into another room, and came out with two Sharpie markers. "Let's give Slendy a face!" He said. I looked at the boy. "We can do that tomorrow. Now you need to go to bed.
  --THE NEXT DAY--
I woke up late. I walked to the room next to mine, another one with gaming posters everywhere and shelves on electronic devices. BEN was still asleep. I went downstairs, and Saw Tails Doll and the other Fox doll playing Sonic R. "Hi." The fox girl said. I asked her what her name was. "Maryan" she replied. Tails Doll put his controller down and hugged Maryan.
  About 10 minutes later, BEN trudged downstairs. He sat down on the couch and began playing a game. I also played my game.
  Later that night, I went inside of a computer. I walked through cyberspace and eventually found what I was looking for. Dante' s computer. I went inside of it, and started haunting him. "Remember me?" I seethed, touching underneath my BEN-resembling eye. The boy slowly rose out of bed. I appeared on his screen. Dante got scared. I looked at him menacingly and smiled. "Want to play my game?" I asked, opening the Agario server.
  And then , I did it. There was blood. Tons of it as my claws were dragged across his back. His screams pierced the darkness and the sounds of ripping flesh and muscle could be heard. I wanted to turn back, but I wouldn't move. It was my dark side. I was being possesed by the demon inside me. Then, I raised my hands and he burst into flames. His blood made a sizzling sound as it was burned. I looked at his flaming corpse and smiled. "Game Over", I seethed as the smell if burning meat filled the room. As I went back into the screen, I whispered, "Who is my next player..."
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silvermoon43344
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on January 04
ELINAviolets
ummh, I really do think it's cool, but it just goes a bit to fast, at least that's what I think.

to sum what I read;
* played zelda game
* went somewhere and bully appears
* bully is a mario-fan and bullies zelda-fan for not having the same opinion See More▼
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breann.west.5
That's pretty much what it is XD
I could have gone crazy detailed on the murder shot, but I decided it was already very gory..
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on September 27, 2015
Maryanxtaillsdoll
I agree :3
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on September 27, 2015
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on September 27, 2015
Maryanxtaillsdoll
:3
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Maryanxtaillsdoll
:3 thx tails doll huging me :3 awww
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Maryanxtaillsdoll
I may make a story
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on September 26, 2015
breann.west.5
Welcome :3
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on September 26, 2015
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on September 26, 2015
breann.west.5
:3 I put Maryan Doll in there, if you haven't noticed!
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on September 26, 2015
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on September 26, 2015
Chica_The_Chicken
... Creepy...
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on September 26, 2015