A Fox Tale

A Fox Tale

Using my drawings as a guide, I create a story based around drawings I have made in the past, and future. This will be the first time I write a story from the perspective from an animal, in this case a fox, so criticize as much as you want!

published on March 19, 201643 reads 11 readers 24 not completed
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Chapter 4.
Meeting an old acquaintance.

Meeting an old acquaintance.

    As Fern made his way down the cliff face, he observed his surroundings quickly. He stands atop a small rock hill near the base of the mountain, and a thick, familiar deciduous forest lay underneath him. A small stream was flowing downward into the forest to his right side. It was broken into many multiple streaks of separate streams that quickly scaled the mountainside.
"Finding a new home is...tougher than expected...but maybe there is something by one of the streams." Fern spoke to himself as he slowly scaled the dark grey rock face. The once cloudy skies can be seen to slowly clear as the sun begins to pierce what clouds are left blocking it. The rain clouds had gone, and now a sun beaming down hope and heat began to rise before settling into its climax height. Fern was at the bottom of the mountain, looking back at it, the mountain seems too tall from the ground up to even think of climbing. The cliffs look as if they jut out of the ground perpendicularlly.
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PagIsAwesome
Awesome drawings! BTW!
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tylnapp
Thank you, though they are not the best...
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on October 10, 2016
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on October 10, 2016
Orange.Soda
"Pew, pew. I'm testing something"
Wow XD
Great story, btw!
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tylnapp
Thank you...that was a place holder....
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on October 10, 2016
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on October 10, 2016
WolfRavena_CharaLover_UT_FNAF
Omg I write stories from pics too!! This amazing it should be selling in shops! And I'm not lying
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tylnapp
Thank you...that...makes me want to write more to the story again..
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WolfRavena_CharaLover_UT_FNAF
Glad to its amazing!
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on October 09, 2016
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SoulOfTheWolves_Inactive
This is really great so far!
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SoulOfTheWolves_Inactive
Welcome! Always glad to help >-<
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on March 19, 2016
tylnapp
You were right, the food did help me out. Thanks for telling me to eat something!
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on March 19, 2016
SoulOfTheWolves_Inactive
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on March 19, 2016
tylnapp
*Is back from eating some waffles*
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on March 19, 2016
SoulOfTheWolves_Inactive
x3 Get some breakfeast, and then continue. *noms on pringles*
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on March 19, 2016
tylnapp
I didn't eat breakfast yet, since I just woke up and hopped straight on the computer...after getting my soft robe.
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on March 19, 2016
SoulOfTheWolves_Inactive
I'm not sure: you might bw a bit to tired, or to hungry,
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on March 19, 2016
tylnapp
These are going to be extremely short chapters....but there's quite a few of them.... I'm trying my best to squeeze as much detail as possible out of each image....but it appears I'm failing....
I could be writing this better, I know I can...but why am I not..?
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on March 19, 2016
SoulOfTheWolves_Inactive
Good luck.
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SoulOfTheWolves_Inactive
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on March 19, 2016
tylnapp
Thank you.
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on March 19, 2016
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on March 19, 2016
tylnapp
Alright.
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on March 19, 2016
SoulOfTheWolves_Inactive
I think you should try and merge version one and two together.
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on March 19, 2016
tylnapp
Which version was better though?

I was contemplating on which version I should just stick to, and erasing the other...
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on March 19, 2016
SoulOfTheWolves_Inactive
No proplem! :3
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on March 19, 2016
tylnapp
Thanks.
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