A Fox Tale

A Fox Tale

Using my drawings as a guide, I create a story based around drawings I have made in the past, and future. This will be the first time I write a story from the perspective from an animal, in this case a fox, so criticize as much as you want!

published on March 19, 201643 reads 11 readers 24 not completed
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Chapter 3.
The Journey to New Lands

The Journey to New Lands

        The skies lighten as Fern slowly gains altitude by climbing the rock face of the mountain. With the dark rain clouds below him, the sky is clear, light blue, but with nothing in sight other than rocks and himself. The air is calm, cold, but also thinner. Climbing for an hour, he found himself approaching a flattened part of the mountainside, though no snow or ice lay anywhere on it. Venturing onto the platform, the clouds appear to be clearing on the other side, and another familiar forest lies within. The growing Forest was isolated at the base of the mountain. It's lush dark green leaves stood out amongst the plains which surrounded the forest. Fern observed the plains to be a slumbering, snow covered forest that had no vegetation. He sighs, then wonders about what he should do.
"If I head back now, I could return to the same spot...maybe try somewhere else...though I simply have the same view from up here as I did on Lookout point."
He thought about going back to the small area he once called home. Deciding to press forward, Fern slowly climbs down the steep rock face, entering the dark grey clouds he had once left before.
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PagIsAwesome
Awesome drawings! BTW!
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tylnapp
Thank you, though they are not the best...
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on October 10, 2016
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Orange.Soda
"Pew, pew. I'm testing something"
Wow XD
Great story, btw!
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tylnapp
Thank you...that was a place holder....
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on October 10, 2016
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WolfRavena_CharaLover_UT_FNAF
Omg I write stories from pics too!! This amazing it should be selling in shops! And I'm not lying
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tylnapp
Thank you...that...makes me want to write more to the story again..
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WolfRavena_CharaLover_UT_FNAF
Glad to its amazing!
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SoulOfTheWolves_Inactive
This is really great so far!
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SoulOfTheWolves_Inactive
Welcome! Always glad to help >-<
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on March 19, 2016
tylnapp
You were right, the food did help me out. Thanks for telling me to eat something!
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on March 19, 2016
tylnapp
*Is back from eating some waffles*
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on March 19, 2016
SoulOfTheWolves_Inactive
x3 Get some breakfeast, and then continue. *noms on pringles*
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on March 19, 2016
tylnapp
I didn't eat breakfast yet, since I just woke up and hopped straight on the computer...after getting my soft robe.
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on March 19, 2016
SoulOfTheWolves_Inactive
I'm not sure: you might bw a bit to tired, or to hungry,
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on March 19, 2016
tylnapp
These are going to be extremely short chapters....but there's quite a few of them.... I'm trying my best to squeeze as much detail as possible out of each image....but it appears I'm failing....
I could be writing this better, I know I can...but why am I not..?
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on March 19, 2016
SoulOfTheWolves_Inactive
Good luck.
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on March 19, 2016
tylnapp
Thank you.
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tylnapp
Alright.
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on March 19, 2016
SoulOfTheWolves_Inactive
I think you should try and merge version one and two together.
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on March 19, 2016
tylnapp
Which version was better though?

I was contemplating on which version I should just stick to, and erasing the other...
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on March 19, 2016
SoulOfTheWolves_Inactive
No proplem! :3
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on March 19, 2016
tylnapp
Thanks.
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