If Percy Jackson said 'yes'

If Percy Jackson said 'yes'

In The Last Olympian when Percy is given the choice of a gift and the gods offer him immortality, what if he said yes? (+extra story line!)

published on June 16, 2014347 reads 34 readers 41 completed
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Chapter 6.

Enchilada Boy

We were in a sort of forest now, one that I recognized from camp.  We were by Zeus's Fist, and Grover was sitting at the bottom of it on the rock that used to hide a secret passage way to the Labyrinth.  His girlfriend Juniper was sitting next to him and they were talking seriously about something.  Probably arguing about my supposed death.  I heard my name and the word 'dead' really close together in a sentence and had to hold myself back before I screamed.  I took a deep breath and walked up to them.  I was in no mood right now to be mourned.  Juniper stopped talking mid sentence and stared at me, then she turned into a tree.  Typical.  Grover  looked behind him to see me and his eyes nearly popped out of his head.
   "I thought you were dead, Percy!"  He shouted.  Of course he thought I was dead!  Didn't everyone, though!?  
   "Why does everyone think I was dead!?"  I finally broke, snapped like a twig but held it together as much as I could, because I was pretty sure that if I really wanted to I could make my friend all goat with the snap of my fingers, "Just because I didn't come back with everyone doesn't automatically mean I couldn't survive!  I can handle being gone for a couple of freaking hours without being dead!"  I gritted my teeth and took in a deep breath.  I must've looked pretty scary because Grover backed up like he wished he could turn into a tree like his nymph girlfriend.  It took a few seconds for me to cool down, but when I did, I stepped down,
   "Sorry.  I just... Everyone I've seen thinks I was dead, and I haven't been gone that long.  It seems kind of stupid, even if we are coming back from a Titan war."  I held my breath hoping to chill myself out.  Then Apollo felt the need to intervene.
   "And besides," He added, as if it would help, "He can't die."  He smiled that mischievous smile that made me know that I had to take Grover's confusion without his help.
   "Um, Percy?"  He turned to me, "What does he mean?"  He looked back and forth between me and Apollo.
   "I..."  I started, but I figured it would just be easier to slice my hand again.  I pulled out and uncapped Riptide and sliced my hand where I had before in the Underworld.  I held it out for Grover to see and he just stared at it with his mouth open, unmoving and unblinking.  
   "Now if you have any questions, feel free to bring them up with anyone but me.  Might I suggest Apollo?"  I said without moving.  Grover just shook his head.  I removed my hand and wiped it on my jeans.
   "Okay then.  Bye Grover.  I probably will never see you again so if I were you I would say goodbye too."   He just stared at me then dragged me into a hug.  He pat me on the back and bleated a goodbye.  That was weird.  
   "Lets go."  I said, and this time I was the one to grab Apollo's arm.  I felt different, and I wasn't sure weather it was a good thing or not.
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Emoshadowqueen
The ending is so sad ?
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on October 24, 2020
ArtemisMoon91904
@Animefan224 @CrystalDiamond2323 @JeweledOwl812 @MockingjayDistrict Do any of you want to see a squeal for this? I know it's been a while, I was just wondering...
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ArtemisMoon91904
@CrystalDiamond 2323 thanx. Did you really cry? Or...? Just curious.
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on July 17, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! *wipes tears*
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ArtemisMoon91904
U read it all?
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on July 16, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
The. Ending. Was. Ugh! You're an awesome writer, but at the moment the fate Rick Riordan had for Percabeth in The Last Olympian was to my liking. You are a VERY talented writer though!
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ArtemisMoon91904
And thank you for the compliments. :)
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on June 22, 2014
ArtemisMoon91904
Good, I would hate to see that you liked this fate better. I wanted a point to coma across that Rick made Percy choose the right thing.
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on June 21, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
If Annabeth doesn't become a goddess I'm going to die.
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ArtemisMoon91904
I finished it... get some tissues
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on June 20, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
I. Will. Die.
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MockingjayDistrict
FOREVER PERCABETH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on June 19, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
And EVER
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on June 19, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
And ever
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on June 19, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
As. In. Be. Dead. FOREVER
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on June 19, 2014
JeweledOwl812
AMAZIN!!
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JeweledOwl812
*gets tissues*
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ArtemisMoon91904
lol good idea! :)
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ArtemisMoon91904
Awww! Thnx so much JeweledOwl812! I'm working on another chapter right now that might make you cry so hold on to your computer screen!
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ArtemisMoon91904
THANK YOU!
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on June 17, 2014
ArtemisMoon91904
Welllllll..... I dont want to spoil for you cuz it might ruin it, but I can give you a hint if you want?
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on June 17, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Can he reunite with Annabeth and she'll become a goddess or something?
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ArtemisMoon91904
Hey, If you don't mind could you rate the story please?
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on June 17, 2014
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ArtemisMoon91904
Oh and who should he visit after his mom, Grover or Tyson?
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ArtemisMoon91904
Ok Grover it is!
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on June 17, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Enchilada boy!
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ArtemisMoon91904
I have something in mind for a happy ending for them, don't worry. ;)
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ArtemisMoon91904
You know what, never mind. Sad endings are more 'makes you cry' type thing.
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on June 20, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Percabeth forever!!!! Can you private message me what will happen?
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MockingjayDistrict
:(( It's sad, I'm just glad Percy didn't say yes. Anyway, PERCABETHHHHHHHHHHHHH oh and the Nico thing... AWKWARD
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ArtemisMoon91904
I'm gonna write some more now, ok? Be ready!!!
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on June 17, 2014
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ArtemisMoon91904
IKR! I love that you like my stuff. My dam stuff...
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MockingjayDistrict
It is physically possible for you to be able to ask my name.
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on June 17, 2014
ArtemisMoon91904
Lol, you're amazing! Can I ask what your name is, MockingjayDistrict?
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on June 17, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
It is almost as good as dam pizza
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Animefan224
I liked it, but I like what Percy chose in the books more. Great Job!:)
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ArtemisMoon91904
Thanks, and I liked what happened in the book, too, but I thought it would be cool to bring this reality to life as well.
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on June 16, 2014
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on June 16, 2014