If Percy Jackson said 'yes'

If Percy Jackson said 'yes'

In The Last Olympian when Percy is given the choice of a gift and the gods offer him immortality, what if he said yes? (+extra story line!)

published on June 16, 2014347 reads 34 readers 41 completed
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Chapter 20.

The Titans

Life was better knowing that I would always have Percy by my side.  That is, until the third Titan war.  I was only a minor goddess, and I was doing more to help the demigods than all of the Olympians combined.  Percy tried to do something, this was the second time he had been in a Titan war with me, but no one else listened.  I guess after three wars, they got tired.  Even Ares looked like he wanted to give up.  I couldn't let that happen.
   I had let Percy know my worries, and he got me up there with everybody so if I needed to I could get in the Olympians' good graces and influence their decisions.  Athena would probably figure out what I was doing, though.  Hopefully she would agree.  
   A huge bang erupted through Mount Olympus.  I wasn't worried, though.  That had been happening for a few weeks now, and everyone knew the magic barriers could easily hold off the demigod and monster attackers sent from Kronos's army.  I knew those small attacks were a distraction to drain the Olympians' powers.  Percy wouldn't fall for it.  He had refused his help in making the barrier, and was therefore outcasted from decisions along with his new best friend the Lord of the Underworld.  He, Hades and I and been making plans to try to save Olympus along with some faithful demigods, but I had found flaws in almost every plan.  One daughter of Apollo with the gift of sight had warned us that he saw bad things for us in Tartarus.  I didn't like that.  
   A boom louder than usual shook the room.  Percy appeared in a wave of light.  
   "They got in."  He warned gravely.  He brought me quickly to the break in the barrier where a small army of demigods was flowing in.  Well, it seemed small to me, but it was probably made up of about twenty-thousand heavily armed demigods.  Percy and I knocked them all out with a flick of our fingers, which were as big as two demigods standing on top of each other.  Well, that was easy.
   "I have an idea, and you're not going to like it, and I can't tell you until it's time."  Percy said.  I hated when Olympians didn't say exactly what they meant.  Percy was especially annoying.  I rolled my eyes then grabbed his hand and he transported us to a small room, the same one with the strange pool of water in the middle.  He was in mortal form, so I did that too.  He looked at me like he wanted me to follow him.  He jumped into the pool.  So did I.
   We both came up at the same time, coughing and spluttering, spitting out water.  He rolled over and faced me, breathing heavily.
   "It had to be done."  He said, then pushed himself up and offered me a hand.  I took it and he helped me up.
   Hades popped up behind us and grabbed us so fast I didn't know what was going on.  I did know, however, that we were going to the underworld; only Hades can transport there.
   The immediate change from light to dark made it hard to see anything, but I could make out enough to know what was going on.  The Titans were here.  Why?  I didn't know.  All I knew was that they had on goal; to throw all gods into Tartarus.
   "You think we can take them?"  Percy asked, his voice devoid of confidence.
   "Absolutely not."  He said, then charged into battle in a cloud of smoke, the dead gathering around him and following him into battle.  Percy and I had almost no choice but to follow him in, even though I knew it was a trap.  They would keep backing up until they were close enough to the entrance to Tartarus to throw us in, but avoid being sucked in themselves.
   Hades' fallen warriors weren't doing a good job at being fallen, but they were amazing warriors.  Think of any great hero, then any hero that hero would know of, then multiply that by ten, then give them the inability to die.  That was who was on our side, along with two Olympians and a minor daughter of Athena.  Now imagine any natural disaster ever and multiply that by fifty, then add all of the disasters' friends and followers, and grow them to about twenty times their original size.  This is what we were up against.  I swallowed and drew my insignificant dagger while Percy drew his sword, Riptide.  I couldn't believe he had kept it this long, but it  was here now.  And so were we.
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Emoshadowqueen
The ending is so sad ?
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on October 24, 2020
ArtemisMoon91904
@Animefan224 @CrystalDiamond2323 @JeweledOwl812 @MockingjayDistrict Do any of you want to see a squeal for this? I know it's been a while, I was just wondering...
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ArtemisMoon91904
@CrystalDiamond 2323 thanx. Did you really cry? Or...? Just curious.
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on July 17, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! *wipes tears*
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ArtemisMoon91904
U read it all?
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MockingjayDistrict
The. Ending. Was. Ugh! You're an awesome writer, but at the moment the fate Rick Riordan had for Percabeth in The Last Olympian was to my liking. You are a VERY talented writer though!
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ArtemisMoon91904
And thank you for the compliments. :)
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on June 22, 2014
ArtemisMoon91904
Good, I would hate to see that you liked this fate better. I wanted a point to coma across that Rick made Percy choose the right thing.
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on June 21, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
If Annabeth doesn't become a goddess I'm going to die.
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ArtemisMoon91904
I finished it... get some tissues
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on June 20, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
I. Will. Die.
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MockingjayDistrict
FOREVER PERCABETH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on June 19, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
And EVER
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on June 19, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
And ever
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on June 19, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
As. In. Be. Dead. FOREVER
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on June 19, 2014
JeweledOwl812
AMAZIN!!
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JeweledOwl812
*gets tissues*
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ArtemisMoon91904
lol good idea! :)
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ArtemisMoon91904
Awww! Thnx so much JeweledOwl812! I'm working on another chapter right now that might make you cry so hold on to your computer screen!
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ArtemisMoon91904
THANK YOU!
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on June 17, 2014
ArtemisMoon91904
Welllllll..... I dont want to spoil for you cuz it might ruin it, but I can give you a hint if you want?
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on June 17, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Can he reunite with Annabeth and she'll become a goddess or something?
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ArtemisMoon91904
Hey, If you don't mind could you rate the story please?
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on June 17, 2014
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ArtemisMoon91904
Oh and who should he visit after his mom, Grover or Tyson?
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ArtemisMoon91904
Ok Grover it is!
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on June 17, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Enchilada boy!
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ArtemisMoon91904
I have something in mind for a happy ending for them, don't worry. ;)
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ArtemisMoon91904
You know what, never mind. Sad endings are more 'makes you cry' type thing.
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on June 20, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Percabeth forever!!!! Can you private message me what will happen?
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MockingjayDistrict
:(( It's sad, I'm just glad Percy didn't say yes. Anyway, PERCABETHHHHHHHHHHHHH oh and the Nico thing... AWKWARD
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ArtemisMoon91904
I'm gonna write some more now, ok? Be ready!!!
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on June 17, 2014
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ArtemisMoon91904
IKR! I love that you like my stuff. My dam stuff...
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MockingjayDistrict
It is physically possible for you to be able to ask my name.
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on June 17, 2014
ArtemisMoon91904
Lol, you're amazing! Can I ask what your name is, MockingjayDistrict?
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on June 17, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
It is almost as good as dam pizza
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Animefan224
I liked it, but I like what Percy chose in the books more. Great Job!:)
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ArtemisMoon91904
Thanks, and I liked what happened in the book, too, but I thought it would be cool to bring this reality to life as well.
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on June 16, 2014
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on June 16, 2014