The Land Of Kaito

The Land Of Kaito

What if Alice in Wonderland wasn't just a fairytale? What if stories and magic were real? What if you could travel to a new world? Giselle Singer, an ordinary girl, discovers that the world isn't as ordinary and as plain as she thought. Join her as she travels to a new world and faces new enemies, not just your typical bully. P.S. I have actually started this story before, I just didn't finish it. So now I'm going to finish it and I hope you enjoy it as much as my other readers enjoyed it.

published on January 07, 2016172 reads 20 readers 24 not completed
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Chapter 2.
New Job

New Job

"Giselle!"

"I'm coming Aunt Claire!" I called back.

Aunt Claire was a tall woman with long brown hair and blue eyes. She looked similar to my father.

I closed my book and ran downstairs as fast as I could.

Aunt Claire was in the kitchen, making breakfast.

"Are you ready for school?" she asked.

"Yes as in ready ready but no in ready to face everyone!" I replied.

"Oh shush, you'll be fine. You've survived these past few weeks!" Aunt Claire teased, a twinkle in her eyes.

I rolled my eyes.

"Ha ha, very funny," I said sarcastically.

Aunt Claire put a plate of pancakes in front of me as she continued to talk.

"Giselle," she began, "you know that for quite a bit, I've been looking for a job."

I nodded, my mouth too full of pancake to speak.

"Well yesterday I was offered a job that I think I'll enjoy," Aunt Claire took a deep breath, "and I accepted."

"Really?" I smiled, "That's great! What's the position though?"

Aunt Claire grinned, while I took a sip of my milk.

"I'm going to be an artist!" she squealed.

I spat out my milk.

"Hey, clean that up!" Aunt Claire scolded.

"I'm sorry, it's just....wow, an artist!" I stuttered.

Aunt Claire loved to paint. One day, she has shown me all her paintings and I asked if she was an artist. She had merely blushed, laughed, and replied: "I wish!"

I grabbed a paper towel and started cleaning up my mess.

"Aunt Claire, I'm so happy for you!" I said.

She nodded, then looked at her watch.

"Oh my gosh, how time flies when you're having fun!" Aunt Claire sighed, "Well, Giselle, you'd better get going, or you'll be late for school!"

I grabbed my backpack and flew out the door. I quickly ran to the bus stop and waited there.

"Today's going to be a long day," I thought.

Little did I know how right I was.

Today, I would discover something terrifying.....
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Awesome_Rockstar
*Claps* Great job, once again!
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on May 05, 2016
Awesome_Rockstar
I will not throw a rock at you!

*Protects you from any rocks thrown*

Mothenzerath...wait, isn't that the boy with three-year-old Giselle in your mini-chapters?
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Queen_of_Narnia
Aww...thanks!

Yup XD
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Awesome_Rockstar
No problem!

o_o Cliff-hanger!
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on April 03, 2016
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on April 03, 2016
Dei_Dei
I request a Love triangle please
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Queen_of_Narnia
XD

Who?
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on April 03, 2016
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on April 03, 2016
Dei_Dei
I thought she got turned into some monster in chapter 20 xD
Can't wait to see what the master's like hehe...
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on April 02, 2016
Awesome_Rockstar
This is so good! Great job!

Why did Giselle scream?

I MUST KNOW.
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Queen_of_Narnia
XD

You'll see...
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on April 02, 2016
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on April 02, 2016
Dei_Dei
This is already getting so good xD
Can't wait for more
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on March 31, 2016
Dei_Dei
Ohmigod write more this is so interesting
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Queen_of_Narnia
Thanks ^_^
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on March 31, 2016
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on March 31, 2016
Dei_Dei
Add more! :)
It doesn't matter how many people read it, my own story doesn't get noticed yet I love writing more, and seeing my very few readers happy

Can I give you some advice? I feel that the bully is a little cliche, an interesting backstory would be cool

This is a lovely story, please keep writing!
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Queen_of_Narnia
Thanks ^_^

I do have a backstory, I just don't know if I want to put it in here...maybe I'll make a separate story for Zoe. So everyone can understand why she's the way she is.

Yes, writing is wonderful! And it feels so nice when people read.
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Queen_of_Narnia
^_^ @Eeveewarrior
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on March 30, 2016
Dei_Dei
@Mooncloud16 thanks a lot! :D
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on March 30, 2016
Queen_of_Narnia
Thanks ^_^

I forgot to comment on your wolf story, but it was really good! I enjoyed it a lot! @Eeveewarrior
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on March 30, 2016
Dei_Dei
That's lovely to hear! I'll be cheering along the sidelines.
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ArtGemKitty
No! POST MORE I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXTTT
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Queen_of_Narnia
XD

I will try to post A.S.A.P.
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on March 30, 2016
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on March 30, 2016
Queen_of_Narnia
Ugh, I don't know if I should add more....not many people seem to be enjoying/liking this...
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foilflingza
addd morrreee omg
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on January 15, 2016
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on January 14, 2016
Queen_of_Narnia
Aw...thanks @HAMSTERVAMPIRE you're pretty good at writing too though :D
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on January 14, 2016
HAMSTERVAMPIRE
omg kewl 5 star <3 ya bestie u so good at writing stories im jelly of yo skills lol
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on January 14, 2016