The Land Of Kaito

The Land Of Kaito

What if Alice in Wonderland wasn't just a fairytale? What if stories and magic were real? What if you could travel to a new world? Giselle Singer, an ordinary girl, discovers that the world isn't as ordinary and as plain as she thought. Join her as she travels to a new world and faces new enemies, not just your typical bully. P.S. I have actually started this story before, I just didn't finish it. So now I'm going to finish it and I hope you enjoy it as much as my other readers enjoyed it.

published on January 07, 2016172 reads 20 readers 24 not completed
show story details+
Chapter 3.
Zoe

Zoe

I ran into class just before the bell rang. Ms. Meyer glared at me but technically I wasn't late, so she couldn't give me detention.

"Okay class, today we will be reviewing the GCF also known as the Great Common Factor-"

I tuned Ms. Meyer out. Who wouldn't?

"Hey Carrot, why were you late for class today? Did a rabbit eat you or something?"

There were snickers.

I gritted my teeth.

I'd know that voice anywhere.

"Technically, I wasn't late Zoe, so you can shut your mouth." I snapped, "And nothing can be dumber than you, so I suppose a rabbit wouldn't mistake me for a carrot."

Zoe was an attractive girl with long blonde hair and green eyes.

Zoe glared at me.

"If I'm so dumb, and you're so smart, how do you explain the fact that I'm popular and you're not?"

"Hmm, let me think.....you're rich. And the only reason you go to this school is because your father bribed the principal with his money." I bluffed.

"That is SO not true!" Zoe hissed, "I have natural art skills, that's why they took me in. But you....you have no talent or money. So how did YOU get in?"

I hated to admit it, but Zoe did have pretty good art skills.

"I can dance, for your information!" I snapped.

"Miss Singer, please refrain from talking to your piers during my class!" Ms. Meyer scolded.

I was angry that I had gotten caught, and not Zoe.

"But Ms.-"

"SILENCE!"

The class snickered. Oh, how I wished I could have just disappeared right on the spot!

"Let us continue with the review," Ms. Meyer said, "Miss Singer, one more word out of you that is not related to this subject and you have detention!"

"But-" I protested.

Ms. Meyer glared at me.

"Yes, Ms. Meyer," I mumbled.

Soon the day was half-over and it was lunch break. I ran outside, breathing in the fresh air.

Zoe and a few of her followers walked up to me.

"Well, Carrot," Zoe spat out 'Carrot' with as much venom as she could muster, "I think we have some unfinished business to attend to."

She lifted her hand to slap me but before her hand could make any contact with my face, I grabbed her arm.

"Don't you dare!" I growled.

I was putting on a facade of bravery. I was actually scared but I tried not to show it. I was also very angry.

All of a sudden, Zoe let out a scream of pain.

I felt her arm burning beneath my hand.

I looked down.

I was frightened by what I saw.
Join Qfeast to read the entire story!
Sign In. It is absolutely free!
5.0
Please Rate:
5.0 out of 5 from 7 users
Add story to favorites
▼Scroll down for more stories

Comments (24)

Awesome_Rockstar
*Claps* Great job, once again!
reply
Report
on May 05, 2016
Awesome_Rockstar
I will not throw a rock at you!

*Protects you from any rocks thrown*

Mothenzerath...wait, isn't that the boy with three-year-old Giselle in your mini-chapters?
reply
Queen_of_Narnia
Aww...thanks!

Yup XD
reply
Awesome_Rockstar
No problem!

o_o Cliff-hanger!
reply
Report
on April 03, 2016
Report
on April 03, 2016
Report
on April 03, 2016
Dei_Dei
I request a Love triangle please
reply
Queen_of_Narnia
XD

Who?
reply
Report
on April 03, 2016
Report
on April 03, 2016
Dei_Dei
I thought she got turned into some monster in chapter 20 xD
Can't wait to see what the master's like hehe...
reply
Report
on April 02, 2016
Awesome_Rockstar
This is so good! Great job!

Why did Giselle scream?

I MUST KNOW.
reply
Queen_of_Narnia
XD

You'll see...
reply
Report
on April 02, 2016
Report
on April 02, 2016
Dei_Dei
This is already getting so good xD
Can't wait for more
reply
Report
on March 31, 2016
Dei_Dei
Ohmigod write more this is so interesting
reply
Queen_of_Narnia
Thanks ^_^
reply
Report
on March 31, 2016
Report
on March 31, 2016
Dei_Dei
Add more! :)
It doesn't matter how many people read it, my own story doesn't get noticed yet I love writing more, and seeing my very few readers happy

Can I give you some advice? I feel that the bully is a little cliche, an interesting backstory would be cool

This is a lovely story, please keep writing!
reply
Queen_of_Narnia
Thanks ^_^

I do have a backstory, I just don't know if I want to put it in here...maybe I'll make a separate story for Zoe. So everyone can understand why she's the way she is.

Yes, writing is wonderful! And it feels so nice when people read.
reply
Queen_of_Narnia
^_^ @Eeveewarrior
reply
Report
on March 30, 2016
Dei_Dei
@Mooncloud16 thanks a lot! :D
reply
Report
on March 30, 2016
Queen_of_Narnia
Thanks ^_^

I forgot to comment on your wolf story, but it was really good! I enjoyed it a lot! @Eeveewarrior
reply
Report
on March 30, 2016
Dei_Dei
That's lovely to hear! I'll be cheering along the sidelines.
reply
Report
on March 30, 2016
Report
on March 30, 2016
Report
on March 30, 2016
ArtGemKitty
No! POST MORE I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXTTT
reply
Queen_of_Narnia
XD

I will try to post A.S.A.P.
reply
Report
on March 30, 2016
Report
on March 30, 2016
Queen_of_Narnia
Ugh, I don't know if I should add more....not many people seem to be enjoying/liking this...
reply
foilflingza
addd morrreee omg
reply
Report
on January 15, 2016
Report
on January 14, 2016
Queen_of_Narnia
Aw...thanks @HAMSTERVAMPIRE you're pretty good at writing too though :D
reply
Report
on January 14, 2016
HAMSTERVAMPIRE
omg kewl 5 star <3 ya bestie u so good at writing stories im jelly of yo skills lol
reply
Report
on January 14, 2016