The Land Of Kaito

The Land Of Kaito

What if Alice in Wonderland wasn't just a fairytale? What if stories and magic were real? What if you could travel to a new world? Giselle Singer, an ordinary girl, discovers that the world isn't as ordinary and as plain as she thought. Join her as she travels to a new world and faces new enemies, not just your typical bully. P.S. I have actually started this story before, I just didn't finish it. So now I'm going to finish it and I hope you enjoy it as much as my other readers enjoyed it.

published on January 07189 reads 24 readers 24 not completed
Chapter 1.
Prologue

Prologue

Carrot.

The one word that haunted me.

Carrot.

How I hated the name, the jeers, and the pain that came with it.

My name is Giselle, Giselle Kathleen Singer.

Pretty normal name, right? So you must be assuming that I'm an average girl with average looks. Well, I have long red hair, blue eyes and a few freckles.

My horrid red hair gave me the name that I hate: Carrot.

But that's not all that's wrong with me.

Most of my family is mental.

My mom is in an asylum right now because she cut me with a knife when I was five years old. My dad committed suicide two years later. So you're probably wondering where I live right now, correct?

I live with my Aunt Claire who is pretty much the only sane person in my family besides me.

My uncle left Aunt Claire and Aunt Claire is the only aunt I have because my mother was an only child.

There's so much I want to ask my mom........like why did she cut me? I was only five.

Did she not love me? Did she despise me? Did she see something horrible? Or was there simply something wrong with her?

And my father....I miss him.

When my mother got locked away, he became....unstable.

He wasn't his cheerful self and he found it hard to live with the embarrassment.

I, on the other hand, learned to live with the jeers. I was used to it anyways.

Strange things have been happening lately....things that aren't logical.

Do you know why?

The answer is simple.

I think I'm going insane.
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Awesome_Rockstar
*Claps* Great job, once again!
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on May 05
Awesome_Rockstar
I will not throw a rock at you!

*Protects you from any rocks thrown*

Mothenzerath...wait, isn't that the boy with three-year-old Giselle in your mini-chapters?
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Queen_of_Narnia
Aww...thanks!

Yup XD
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Awesome_Rockstar
No problem!

o_o Cliff-hanger!
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on April 03
Dei_Dei
I request a Love triangle please
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Queen_of_Narnia
XD

Who?
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on April 03
Dei_Dei
I thought she got turned into some monster in chapter 20 xD
Can't wait to see what the master's like hehe...
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on April 02
Awesome_Rockstar
This is so good! Great job!

Why did Giselle scream?

I MUST KNOW.
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Queen_of_Narnia
XD

You'll see...
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on April 02
Dei_Dei
This is already getting so good xD
Can't wait for more
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on March 31
Dei_Dei
Ohmigod write more this is so interesting
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Queen_of_Narnia
Thanks ^_^
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on March 31
Dei_Dei
Add more!
It doesn't matter how many people read it, my own story doesn't get noticed yet I love writing more, and seeing my very few readers happy

Can I give you some advice? I feel that the bully is a little cliche, an interesting backstory would be cool

This is a lovely story, please keep writing!
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Queen_of_Narnia
Thanks ^_^

I do have a backstory, I just don't know if I want to put it in here...maybe I'll make a separate story for Zoe. So everyone can understand why she's the way she is.

Yes, writing is wonderful! And it feels so nice when people read.
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Queen_of_Narnia
^_^ @Eeveewarrior
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on March 30
Dei_Dei
@Mooncloud16 thanks a lot!
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on March 30
Queen_of_Narnia
Thanks ^_^

I forgot to comment on your wolf story, but it was really good! I enjoyed it a lot! @Eeveewarrior
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on March 30
Dei_Dei
That's lovely to hear! I'll be cheering along the sidelines.
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ArtGemKitty
No! POST MORE I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXTTT
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Queen_of_Narnia
XD

I will try to post A.S.A.P.
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Queen_of_Narnia
Ugh, I don't know if I should add more....not many people seem to be enjoying/liking this...
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TricksterOfLife
addd morrreee omg
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on January 14
Queen_of_Narnia
Aw...thanks @HAMSTERVAMPIRE you're pretty good at writing too though
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on January 14
HAMSTERVAMPIRE
omg kewl 5 star ya bestie u so good at writing stories im jelly of yo skills lol
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