Redik the hedgehog

Redik the hedgehog

This is the story of a hedgehog, an experiment, born to kill Sonic and his friends. This is my story. Thanks for reading this, I hope you enjoy.

published on January 04, 201679 reads 20 readers 19 completed
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Chapter 2.
First mission

First mission

A few days later,in a forest.
"Did you understand what you have to do?"
"Relax Eggdoc, and leave me do my job"
The wind,the earth under my feet while i run...that's...Wait, what is that? A blue thing is running at great speed, could it be...?Yes! I found him!
"Hey doc, I found him. Some last minute hint?"
"Don't let him escape!"
"Got it." I began to run in to Sonic and...

Sonic's POV
"Ah...I love this feeling, the wind...on my face...this is life. Wait,what's that? An Orange and black blur? Who...?Aaaagh!"

GOT HIM!
"Argh...Who are you? Why are you attacking me? Do I know you?"
"No,You don't know me, but I know you Sonic the hedgehog. Dr. Eggman sends you his FAREWELL"And I begun to hit him violently.He was trying to dodge my punches but it seemed I was too fast even for him.
"What's wrong Sonic?You are the fastest in this world ,aren't you?So why aren't you dodging my hits?Ahahahahah!You can't!I'm too fast for you!"

Sonic's POV
"Urgh!This guy...is really too...fast...If it continue like this i will..."

"SONIC!"
Another voice!Who the hell is now?A pink...Hedgehog?Amy?Wait, how can I know her?
"LEAVE MY SONIC ALONE!!!" She begun to swing her giant hammer against me.I stopped her with one hand.
"So...What are you supposed to do now?"I smirked.She seemed to be scaried.I throwed her and "her" Sonic against a huge rock ,then I jumped on her and hit her until she fainted.
Sonic tried to stop me , but how he was, he was useless.I "gently" put him to sleep and...
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Sevas_Ren
Ok, thanks to all those who read this story,who remained with Redik until now and who asked me to continue this.
A special thanks goes to sapphirethehedgehog who made me rediscover the passion for Sonic's universe.(I know I have already said this but I wanted to thank you again)
Atsuko_Maeda_15_Acchan aka Jackie the Hedgehog, I'm sorry that your part has been See More▼
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Weiss_Schnee
Hey, it's fine, I don't mind if I'm a small addition, I'm in there, right? :D
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Weiss_Schnee
Nah, not this girl!
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on January 13, 2016
Sevas_Ren
I'm glad you didn't get angry...usually when I give a part to one of my friends, if it's short, they get mad
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Weiss_Schnee
Duuude nice!
And may I make a suggestion for my OC to be included, please?
Her name is Jackie,and she is Sonic's wife.
Pwetty pwease???? *Puss In Boots eyes*
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Sevas_Ren
I don't see why not.
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on January 08, 2016
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on January 07, 2016
Weiss_Schnee
Nice job so far :)
Keep this story going, I have a feeling it will become a big hit within Qfeast's Sonic fanbase!
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Sevas_Ren
This is the first time we talked each other. This still makes me smile. *hugs*
https://www.qfeast.com/story/KH7XDN/6-months-treasure-hunt-2
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Weiss_Schnee
*hugs back* I can't believe it... that long ago...
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Sevas_Ren
Thanks, I hope to be good enough
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Sevas_Ren
Thanks, I'll do it.
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on January 04, 2016
Weiss_Schnee
I'm sure you will be, just keep working at it, and you'll get better.
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sapphirethehedgehog
XD I love how Amy was like like "lalala....SONICS IN TROUBLE! ARHHHHHH!" XD it's like she knows o.o
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Sevas_Ren
I have to thank you sapphire. It's thanks to you if I found again the passion for Sonic. So...THANKS A LOT!?
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sapphirethehedgehog
Dun dun duunnnn XD
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on January 04, 2016
Weiss_Schnee
You're a hero, Sapph! XD
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on January 04, 2016
sapphirethehedgehog
Oh- wait really? Haha! That's awesome! Thanks! :D
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Sevas_Ren
I'm glad that you're liking it.?
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milfs
Niiiiiiiiiice. :3
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