Redik the hedgehog

Redik the hedgehog

This is the story of a hedgehog, an experiment, born to kill Sonic and his friends. This is my story. Thanks for reading this, I hope you enjoy.

published on January 04, 201692 reads 26 readers 23 completed
Chapter 1.
Who am I?

Who am I?

"Who...am I? Why I can't remember nothing? Wait...it's all black...Am I blind? No,I can open my eyes"I opened my eyes,only to see I was in some kind of tube, plenty of a green fluid."Where the hell am I?"
Metallic voice:-Dr. Eggman, R3D1K is...ehm...alive? Hey Orbot, is correct what i said?
Another metallic voice:-Yes Cubot...it's correct
"Where are they? I can't see them...wait, did they just call me R3D-something?Is that my name?Rrgh, i can't remember"
Another voice spoke,it seemed to be a bit angry:-Well, what are you waiting for?Give him the last detail,if he will survive,only if he will survive, I will call him "alive",got it?
"The last de-urgh!Gh..."I tried to scream but I just couldn't.I sensed a huge amount of energy flow in my body,burning like fire.Then I fainted.
When I woke up, I was in some kind of lab. I stand up, coughing. My chest was hurting "Cough cough...what the...where..."
"Well, good morning R3D1K.You have survived.Good."This...was the non-metallic voice! I looked around to see who was there, and I found him.He was looking at me behind a window.
"I...what? Who are you?" He smirked (What is this guy? An egg?)
"I am Dr. Eggman,Your creator.Slept we-"
"Egg...Man?Pfff...Ahahahahah!You are...a man?Ahahahah,I bet that anyone call you Eggbutt instead,Ahahah or Eggdoc Ahahah!"
"...Orbot!Cubot! How much of Sonic's DNA had you put into him, you useless pieces of iunk?!"
Two robots  came close to him.One of them seemed a cube,the other an orb...
"I think...maybe 20%?"Told the cube.He didn't seem very smart.
"20?! I TOLD YOU TO PUT 2%!!!WHY 20?!"
"Because Cubot thoutgh that the experiment would be 10 times faster than-"
"Even with the 100% of that little blue rat's DNA the experiment will be always as fast as him!!!IDIOTS!"And with that he kicks away the robots.
"Sonic?Who is this guy?Is he fast?"I asked.
"Yes...He's fast...But you can be faster than him,with the caos control that you possess thanks to Shadow's DNA inside you."Shadow...
"Shadow?Who is this?"There was something...like I know them already...
"Another hedgehog,like you and Sonic.But Shadow call himself the-"
"Ultimate life form...that's wrong.I'm the ultimate life form. Not this faker." I felt hurted in the pride, but why? I didn't understand.
Eggman smirked "Yes...you are the ultimate life form...and the ultimate assassin!You have the power to kill those fakers and to demonstrate that you are the Real Ultimate Life Form.This is why I created you."
"Yeah,yeah i'll kill'em,i'll kill'em all...I will be the only one...Doc, gimme every information I need,to accomplish my mission...No one will remain, only me...eheh..eheheh...ehehahahahahah!"I don't know why, but the idea wasn't so bad for me.To be honest,I liked it.

Eggman's POV
"My plan...is running...eheheh...That silly rat doesn't think that I'm using him,even with the genius of Tails.This is good.I'm worried about his Scourge's part.Oh, nevermind...eheh, i think i will enjoy this"
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XxMaria_chanxX
OMG THAT WAS AMAZING
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on June 02, 2016
Toa_Bora
Ok, thanks to all those who read this story,who remained with Redik until now and who asked me to continue this.
A special thanks goes to sapphirethehedgehog who made me rediscover the passion for Sonic's universe.(I know I have already said this but I wanted to thank you again)
Atsuko_Maeda_15_Acchan aka Jackie the Hedgehog, I'm sorry that your part has been See More▼
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Queen_Miku
Hey, it's fine, I don't mind if I'm a small addition, I'm in there, right?
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Queen_Miku
Nah, not this girl!
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on January 13, 2016
Toa_Bora
I'm glad you didn't get angry...usually when I give a part to one of my friends, if it's short, they get mad
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on January 13, 2016
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on January 12, 2016
Queen_Miku
Duuude nice!
And may I make a suggestion for my OC to be included, please?
Her name is Jackie,and she is Sonic's wife.
Pwetty pwease???? *Puss In Boots eyes*
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Toa_Bora
I don't see why not.
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on January 08, 2016
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on January 07, 2016
PorkCutletBowl
Haha I really love it so far. From what I read, I can see Redik gettig along well with my oc Calista, who was also made by Eggman x3
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Toa_Bora
Really?
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PorkCutletBowl
Yeah, Calista is a white hedgehog who kinda looks like Silver, and has been working for eggman since she was created. Both hedgehogs have similar personalitys
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on January 05, 2016
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on January 05, 2016
Queen_Miku
Nice job so far
Keep this story going, I have a feeling it will become a big hit within Qfeast's Sonic fanbase!
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Toa_Bora
This is the first time we talked each other. This still makes me smile. *hugs*
https://www.qfeast.com/story/KH7XDN/6-months-treasure-hunt-2
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Queen_Miku
*hugs back* I can't believe it... that long ago...
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on April 28, 2016
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on April 28, 2016
Toa_Bora
Thanks, I hope to be good enough
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Toa_Bora
Thanks, I'll do it.
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on January 04, 2016
Queen_Miku
I'm sure you will be, just keep working at it, and you'll get better.
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on January 04, 2016
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on January 04, 2016
sapphirethehedgehog
XD I love how Amy was like like "lalala....SONICS IN TROUBLE! ARHHHHHH!" XD it's like she knows o.o
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Toa_Bora
I have to thank you sapphire. It's thanks to you if I found again the passion for Sonic. So...THANKS A LOT!😄
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sapphirethehedgehog
Dun dun duunnnn XD
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on January 04, 2016
Queen_Miku
You're a hero, Sapph! XD
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on January 04, 2016
sapphirethehedgehog
Oh- wait really? Haha! That's awesome! Thanks!
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on January 04, 2016
Toa_Bora
I'm glad that you're liking it.😄
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on January 04, 2016
Helpless
Niiiiiiiiiice. :3
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on January 04, 2016