Kyle's story (Remastered)

So I got to thinking and saw that Kyle is 1. Too over powered. 2. His back story is fairly far fetched. So imma do it again with some changes.

published on April 27, 201529 reads 7 readers 37 not completed
Chapter 1.

The awaking 2.0

Kyle's POV
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The waiting. The constant waiting. What was I waiting for you ask? Well I'm waiting to get out of this tube thing. Waiting to go and do what I was made to do...Kill. My name is Kyle. I am a bio mechanical robot. Well you wouldn't tell that by looking at me. See I am still a normal fox with normal insides and outsides but only I was made rather than born. When you see me I am just a electric blue fox with a blood red tail. But when I get close...You too dead to know what I am.

The door on my containment tube finally opened. I stepped out to see Eggman stood there, like he does all the time he lets me out, he still thinks I'm unstable. Maybe he's right. Seems some of his "Minions" were there too.
"He's stable...For now" One of them said. He's wrong.
"Good" Eggman said with some excitement. "Now then has obtained any new abilities, while you "Enhanced" him?"
"Yes sir. We gave him a new few things along side his invisibility" The other robot told him. I didn't even know that was still a thing. "He has very enhanced vision and combat awareness. Such as, he can predict the opponents next move. Just by seeing a certain muscle of mechanical movement" That sounds cool!
"Very good!" Eggman was really getting into me now I swear. "Now shall we test this?"
"Sir I am highly certain I do-" I went to say.
"Yes sir we can right this way" The first robot interrupted me. I rolled my eyes as we all followed it to the main lab. I stepped in and the door closed. I took my staff off my back. Oh yeah forgot about that. Yeah I have staff, it can extend to about 6 foot starting at about 3. I waited...Waited and waited. Then...Two robots about my height came out of two doors either side of me. One ran right at me. I watched his and studied him. There was something about the way it was running. I just knew it was going to jump and send his right fist my way. I spun my staff. And without fail it did. It jumped at me. I did a roll off to the left side. The robot completely missed and smashed my staff into it's back. The other started to run at me from my left. I waited and hit a switch on my staff. The staff slammed into it's chest and set it back. I have no idea how I knew but I just did. I could tell the robot I hit in the back was going to elbow me in the back of the head. I quickly stood back up and jumped. I landed on it's elbow as it swung. I stabbed my staff into the side of it's head. The other came back for more and I jumped at it. I knew it was going to try and kick me. I spun in mid air and dodged it by an inch. I landed and turned myself invisible. The robot looked around, it didn't have a clue i was now behind it. I jumped on it's back and put my staff around it's neck like thing it had. I slowly started to rip it's head off. With one huge pull I pulled head clean off. I jumped off and walked back to the door. I walked in. "I told you I was ready"
"It seems you were but there is still more to be done" Eggman said.
I suddenly burst out into a small rage "I tired of your games Eggman!" I yelled at him "I am ready to do this!"
"Arr fine" He was going to let me do this. "OK first a quick check up. One: What is your top priority?"
"Taking out Sonic the hedgehog" I answered.
"Two: What are you to do?"
"Take him in or kill if sighted"
"What are you to do if you come across anyone who stops you?"
"Terminate them" I said coldly.
"Good, now go and come back alive!" He yelled as I walked off. It was time to act.
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sapphirethehedgehog
X3 Awesome!
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SpinnerFTW
Kyle: Found ya! Idk what i wanted to say was...
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sapphirethehedgehog
Sapphire: *facepalm* XD
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on July 03, 2015
SpinnerFTW
Kyle: Idk
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on July 03, 2015
sapphirethehedgehog
Sapphire: hm?
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on July 03, 2015
sapphirethehedgehog
Sapphire: *reads "super speed is awesome" HECK YEAH!!! XD
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SpinnerFTW
Kyle: Tch, ikr? So cool.
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sapphirethehedgehog
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on June 04, 2015
Lady_Artemis
You know what we need in this story?
WHEN KYLE MET SUELLA!
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SpinnerFTW
I'm getting to that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on May 01, 2015
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on May 01, 2015
sapphirethehedgehog
So that's how you got your ear like that! XD
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SpinnerFTW
I told you I'd say
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sapphirethehedgehog
XD Omg i loved this, you made Sapph look so awesome!
Sapphire:
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SpinnerFTW
Coz she is. XD
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sapphirethehedgehog
XD yayyy!!!
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on April 29, 2015
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on April 29, 2015
sapphirethehedgehog
XD damnnnnn, this is where it gets rough! XD
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SpinnerFTW
Ikr!
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on April 29, 2015
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on April 29, 2015
Lady_Artemis
O_O
Sapphire, Tails, and Knuckles?!?!
HOLY HELL, SHIT IS GONNA GO DOWN!!!
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SpinnerFTW
I don't think Tails is ganna fight tbh he's more passive. XD
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on April 28, 2015
sapphirethehedgehog
D: Noooooo! Not Sonic DX
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SpinnerFTW
Kyle: Why does everyone like him so much?
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sapphirethehedgehog
Sapphire: :c boo
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on April 27, 2015
SpinnerFTW
Kyle: I really don't care.
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on April 27, 2015
sapphirethehedgehog
Sapphire: Hes a hero! The hero of mobias and the blue blur!
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Lady_Artemis
Jackie: YOU DARE KILL MY SONIC!!!!!!!
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SpinnerFTW
Kyle: Stay out of my way woman. Or I'll do the same to you.
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SpinnerFTW
Kyle: -_- OK
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on April 27, 2015
Lady_Artemis
Jackie: *smirks* What if I told you who my father was?
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on April 27, 2015
SpinnerFTW
Kyle: Ummm I have only just woke up from like a 2 year sleep and I have only every been woken up one other time. So fears not an issue. Also I am a bio mechanical robot I don't think I can be done over that easy. Nice try though.
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on April 27, 2015
Lady_Artemis
Jackie: It's called simulation serum. Your worst nightmare. You fall unconscious, and your brain produces a hallucination of your worst fears. And you don't wake up until you can calm yourself down... which will be hard considering it's your WORST FEARS!
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on April 27, 2015
SpinnerFTW
Kyle: And that will do what?
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on April 27, 2015
Lady_Artemis
Jackie: Come near me and I inject this in you.
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on April 27, 2015
SpinnerFTW
(Wow XD)
Kyle: Um what? Why? You're weird.
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on April 27, 2015
Lady_Artemis
Jackie: Oh really? *takes out a needle*
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on April 27, 2015
SpinnerFTW
Kyle: Ohhh I'm so scared of someone who is just as normal as me. Take me apart I'll just be built better. And the more we fight the better I become woman.
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on April 27, 2015
Lady_Artemis
Jackie: Hm. Brave mortal, wanting to battle a DEMIGOD.
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