Genie Magic

One lonely hedgehog, desperate to see the outside world, to meet new friends. But she was locked away for a reason - she isn't normal.

published on June 02, 2014122 reads 18 readers 24 not completed
show story details+
Genie Magic
Chapter 2.

New Face In Town

Jackie
______

This has gotta be one of the coolest nights ever! Alexis, Leat, Sapphire and I are out in town at this amazing nightclub, and we are having the time of our lives. Non-stop jiving on the dance floor, lots of money for drinks - before you ask, we're not drinking alcohol! - and not a care in the world.
Then I look up to the stage and see five familiar figures up there "OH MY GOD!!!"
"What's up Jackie?" Leat asks me.
"Look at that stage Leat!" And she does. And like me, she can't help but scream in joy.
Our favourite boy band is on that stage! Niall winks at the four of us, to let us know to go backstage and wait for the boys to finish.
So we do, and it's pretty cool. Away from the crowd, we can just relax. The people back there give us a drink each.
"Cheers, girls," I say, raising my glass.
"Cheers," the others repeat, as we cling our glasses together.
Then we hear Leat screaming. "HOTTIE ALERT! Niall Horan is coming RIGHT THIS WAY!"
And we can't believe it! "Hey, nice of you to come by," he says.
Leat blushes madly when she says, "Thanks."
"Guess you already know us, then. Anyways, I was thinking... You wanna hang out sometime?"
OH MY GOD HE JUST ASKED LEAT ON A DATE!
"I'd love to!" Leat screams in joy, and hugs Niall.
We then see another girl looking around backstage, and accidentally knocks over a guitar. I run over to stand it back up.
The girl looks at me. "I am so sorry. Did I break... um... that thing?" She points to the guitar.
"This guitar?" I say. "No worries." I then see her shoes. "Hey, wicked shoes, girl! Where'd you get them?"
"But... my shoes aren't evil."
"Say what?" I ask, as I start to play a tune on the guitar. Leat, Sapphire, and Alexis start to dance and jump around to it.
"Wicked tune, Jackie!" Sapphire says.
"Thanks, I was taught it," I giggle.
We then see one of the bouncers approaching. "Girls, did you see a gypsy looking girl come in here?"
"What for?" Leat asks.
"Never paid her entry fee, she did. Thinks it's a free concert." He then looks at the window. "Hey! You!"
He spotted her, and starts running, but she disappears.
Into thin air.
Total Weird.
Who was that?
Join Qfeast to read the entire story!
Sign In. It is absolutely free!
5.0
Please Rate:
5.0 out of 5 from 5 users
Be the first to add this story to favorites
▼Scroll down for more stories

Comments (24)

Noescaping
I wish you hadn't ended this story, it was a really cool idea I would've loved to see it continue
reply
Report
on April 21, 2017
Noescaping
I'm the best DJ on Mobius. XD. Dj I stole your job. XD
Dj: :(
Alexis: Sorry dude.
reply
Report
on June 10, 2014
sapphirethehedgehog
XD SHELTER!
reply
sapphirethehedgehog
@.@
reply
Weiss_Schnee
Report
on September 27, 2014
Report
on September 27, 2014
Weiss_Schnee
DJ!
NIALL!
A!
reply
Report
on September 27, 2014
Report
on June 09, 2014
Cristallite
Cool
reply
Report
on June 09, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Can u in include my OC Dawn too?
reply
Report
on June 09, 2014
Weiss_Schnee
You have a Sonic OC? Cool! Post on my wall what she's like!
reply
Report
on June 06, 2014
sapphirethehedgehog
oOo suspence!
reply
Report
on June 06, 2014
Weiss_Schnee
Simple. Just hover your mouse over create on the top bar, and select story. You then type in what you want your story to be called, and a brief description to the story intro, maybe a pic as well, it's strongly recommended. Then click Save and next, and get working on the chapters! :)
reply
Report
on June 04, 2014
Pepper_the_wolf
hola im new you coud tell me how to make storys and could you add my oc pepper shes a blue wolf with blue wings it's okay if you can't add her that's why my user is pepper the wolf:-c
reply
Report
on June 04, 2014
sapphirethehedgehog
Yay! Girls night at Jackies!!
reply
Report
on June 04, 2014
Cristallite
Cool
reply
Report
on June 04, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Cool, write more! You're a really talented writer.
reply
Report
on June 03, 2014
sapphirethehedgehog
Report
on June 03, 2014
Fiendish_Heathen
Awesome
reply
Report
on June 03, 2014
Cristallite
Nice
reply
Report
on June 03, 2014
Noescaping
Cool.
reply
Report
on June 03, 2014
Weiss_Schnee
I'll see if I can.
reply
Report
on June 02, 2014
Weiss_Schnee
Leat X Niall!
I SHIP THAT!!!
XD
reply
Report
on June 02, 2014
Frostgoddess
Awesome!
reply
Report
on June 02, 2014
Frostgoddess
Coolio!
reply
Report
on June 02, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Cool so far! Can I have an OC named Dawn?
reply
Report
on June 02, 2014