Genie Magic

Genie Magic

One lonely hedgehog, desperate to see the outside world, to meet new friends. But she was locked away for a reason - she isn't normal.

published on June 02, 2014102 reads 19 readers 25 not completed
Chapter 1.

Prologue: Escaping

Katia
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I can't take it anymore. I want out of this prison. I don't care what my father, or Don or Vell have to say about it. They won't catch me this time.
I pop out of my bottle and start walking through the dark hallways, door after sliding door, finding any exit.
But then I see Don's guard thugs walking through, so I creep to the side of the wall until they pass, then run the opposite way they are walking.
Through each door, I hear them coming. They don't stop coming.
Then one sees me! He presses the red button, alerting everyone in the compound that I am trying to escape.
Damnit!
Don and Vell know I'm trying to get out of here!
I run like my life depends on it, which at this moment, it does.
I hear footsteps of guards, so I jump and cling to the ceiling. They pass within seconds, and I drop down again, running to a multiple hallway.
But I'm trapped. In every direction, those thugs are walking towards me.
I'm done for!
But then I look up. An air vent!
I concentrate hard, and I dissolve into tiny sparkles, floating through the vent. Once I leave the vent, I transform to normal again.
I'm out of there!
Finally!
I grab for my bag and take out my carpet, and take off, in search of somewhere to feel free.
Somewhere to meet new friends.
Somewhere I can be a normal teenager.
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Comments (25)

Alexishedgebat
Although it would be cool if I was a pop star. XD. Although the dj thing is cool to. XD
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on June 10, 2014
Alexishedgebat
I'm the best DJ on Mobius. XD. Dj I stole your job. XD
Dj:
Alexis: Sorry dude.
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on June 10, 2014
sapphirethehedgehog
XD SHELTER!
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sapphirethehedgehog
@.@
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Lady_Artemis
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on September 27, 2014
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on September 27, 2014
Lady_Artemis
DJ!
NIALL!
A!
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on September 27, 2014
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on June 09, 2014
The_Panda_Otaku
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on June 09, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Can u in include my OC Dawn too?
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on June 09, 2014
Lady_Artemis
You have a Sonic OC? Cool! Post on my wall what she's like!
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on June 06, 2014
sapphirethehedgehog
oOo suspence!
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on June 06, 2014
Lady_Artemis
Simple. Just hover your mouse over create on the top bar, and select story. You then type in what you want your story to be called, and a brief description to the story intro, maybe a pic as well, it's strongly recommended. Then click Save and next, and get working on the chapters!
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on June 04, 2014
Pepper_the_wolf
hola im new you coud tell me how to make storys and could you add my oc pepper shes a blue wolf with blue wings it's okay if you can't add her that's why my user is pepper the wolf
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on June 04, 2014
sapphirethehedgehog
Yay! Girls night at Jackies!!
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on June 04, 2014
The_Panda_Otaku
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on June 04, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Cool, write more! You're a really talented writer.
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on June 03, 2014
sapphirethehedgehog
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on June 03, 2014
Fiendish_Heathen
Awesome
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on June 03, 2014
The_Panda_Otaku
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on June 03, 2014
Alexishedgebat
Cool.
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on June 03, 2014
SnakesVenomSans
Ok ^_^
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on June 02, 2014
Lady_Artemis
I'll see if I can.
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on June 02, 2014
Lady_Artemis
Leat X Niall!
I SHIP THAT!!!
XD
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on June 02, 2014
Frostgoddess
Awesome!
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on June 02, 2014
Frostgoddess
Coolio!
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on June 02, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Cool so far! Can I have an OC named Dawn?
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on June 02, 2014