Judgement of Sins - Incomplete

Judgement of Sins - Incomplete

Greed, Wrath, Sloth, Envy, Gluttony, Lust, Pride, these are reason for why 14 people are put into a game of life and death. Who will live who will die? You'll just have to see... Please, comment how you felt about the story and rate it whatever you like it should be rated!

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Chapter 2.

Part 2: The First Judgement

So I have to choose someone to sacrifice so that I can live...how...how could this have happened to me!?, I think to myself.

”I-I-I can’t die here! I need to see them again...I need to see my son and my wife before I go.”

Then, the monitor displays numbers counting down from five seconds. Five. Four. Three. Two. One. Zero. The monitor then, begins speaking again, "The time has come for the first judgement. Who will you vote to die lion? The cat, rabbit, fox, horse, pig, or bear? The choice is yours."

After it was done talking it starts displaying a timer that is counting down from seven minutes. I think about who I'm going to choose. As I try to think who I want to vote for I look at the chart again.

"How is this supposed to help me!?" I start to panic

Maybe this would help people other people, but certainly not me, I think to myself. I look at the monitor again. Two minutes remaining. I panic even more as I scan over the chart one more time.

I turn and quickly shout "Horse! I choose the horse!"

I don't know why I chose the horse. But I needed to say something or else I would die.
Then the monitor starts speaking again, "All votes has been received. Judgement will now commence and the person with the most votes is...the cat. Judge and jury have spoken, but it is time to choose the executioner."

Executioner? What does it mean by executioner?

"That is the final rule of this game.

7. After every judgment, one of the other sinners will be chosen to kill the person with the most votes. But, instead of the executioner being chosen by voting. Them and the execution will be chosen randomly. If the executioner fails to kill the person with the most votes before the next judgement, then they will both be executed. The executioner will have one of their hands un-handcuffed during this time

Now then it is time for the executioner and execution to be chosen. Good luck."
Then, on the monitor it displays a virtual wheel with all the animals except the cat on it. It starts spinning and spinning and spinning until it slows down and lands on: Rabbit. However, the wheel starts spinning again just this time it has stuff like scissors, knife, hanging, hammer, ax, bare hands, poison, electricity, and many others. These must be the executions, I think to myself. The wheel slows down once again and lands on: Scissors.

The monitor starts speaking again, "The executioner and execution have been chosen. Commencing judgement."

Then, I hear the sound of a door opening from somewhere and then walking. I keep hearing the person walking until I they stop and open and close a door that must be next to my room. But, I don’t if it’s a door my left or right because the sound is kind of muffled. The monitor suddenly comes back on and shows what looks like a black, white, and grey camera feed coming from a room that looks identical to mine. It shows a man in a black suit, tie, and shoes, however he also has a mask on like me. A rabbit mask. It is torn in places too. Also, he is holding scissors in his now free right hand. There is also a woman in the same attire except with a cat mask on instead of a rabbit one and they are apparently talking to each other. This must be the cat's room, I think to myself. If they are talking to each other, then it must be too quiet to be audible. Suddenly, the rabbit man runs at the cat woman slams her against the wall with his shoulder. At the same time I hear a bang come from the wall besides me. Then, as she tries to recover from the attack, the rabbit man lunges at her and stabs her in the stomach. Then, when she falls to the ground, the rabbit man gets on top of her and he starts stabbing her over and over again from the waist up, but also from the head below. All the while she is screaming in agony and trying to get him off of her. He keeps stabbing her. All I can see on the screen is blood spilling and splattering everywhere from the helpless woman. It’s only been a couple of seconds but I want to look away. The blood, the violence, the pain, the misery, the despair it’s too much for me to bear. I feel sick, why is this happening? I look away and scream trying to drown out the sound of the chaos. But, I can still hear the woman screaming and the sound of the rabbit man stabbing her. There must be something that muffles my voice a little will this is happening because even though I‘m screaming at the top of my lungs I can barely hear my screams even, though earlier I can hear my voice just fine. I want to cover my ears. But, I can't because of these stupid handcuffs. Then, the woman stops screaming and all I can hear is the sound of metal sinking into flesh and being pulled out again and again. Then, I hear nothing. I look back to monitor only for a gruesome scene to be presented on the monitor. The woman is near the back wall of the room on her side dead, with multiple stab wounds all over her stomach, arms, and chest still seeping with blood. The walls and floor colored crimson with her blood, and she must've also been able to get the rabbit man off her and get away a little bit because there was a streak of blood coming from where she was first being stabbed to her body. Between the woman's head and left corner of the room is her mask which must have fallen and rolled away at some point after she died, which was also covered in blood. In front of the dead woman stands the rabbit man looking down at her covered in blood, his whole body trembling, and his right hand still holding the scissors now dripping with blood forming a small pool of red next to his right foot. Then, he steps back a few steps, screams and falls to his knees crying, letting go of the scissors in the process. Then, the monitor displays, "Results: The Hunter Has Become The Hunted." After a few seconds the monitor goes back to the room with the rabbit man still on his knees crying.

The monitor starts speaking once again, "The first judgement has passed. Now, executioner drop your weapon and put your hands behind your back."

It takes a few seconds but, the rabbit man hesitantly puts his hands behind his back. The handcuffs automatically latch onto his other hand and the monitor goes black and starts shows the timer again. Now it is counting back down from 7 hours.
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