Would you come after me if I walk away?

Would you come after me if I walk away?

Lilith was a Normal girl, being shy she only had one friend. But weirdly one day she walked away. In this story, you will learn the importance of friendship. And to always "keep your old friends one is silver the other gold.

published on September 09, 201615 reads 6 readers 5 not completed
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Chapter 4.

Ariana's POV

I watched Lilith walk away, but surprising didn't really care. I mean like I had many friends. So who meads her? I continued talking to my friends as Lilith walked away. The sun seemed to darken as if night fell on this pointless world. I could feel her tears run down her face. Guilt rushed through me, like a race. I didn't show it.  I continued our *cough* pointless *cough* discussion about what to do.
The quilt came back to haunt me again. Say sorry. Sorry. Sorry. It pulsed through my head. I felt the pointless world spin, nothing made sense now. "Ermm Sorry guys I Got to go" I awkwardly walked away. I felt my heart bleed, I couldn't believe what I did.
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spookiness1e
I really like your writing style. Keep up the good work! The only thing you could perhaps do is writing the chapters a bit longer. But except that, it is nicely written and you can describe feelings very well. :)
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WolfRavena_CharaLover_UT_FNAF
Thanks for the feed back, and this story is supposed to have short chapters but I will keep that in mind
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WolfRavena_CharaLover_UT_FNAF
Also thanks for reading and commenting @erudite_nessie
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on September 10, 2016
spookiness1e
Okay :)
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WolfRavena_CharaLover_UT_FNAF
At least I have one reader
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