Poetry theme breakups

Poetry theme breakups

Well like I said in my poetry info before one of my poems don't reach the charter requirements so I'm just gonna put two in one! The theme is breakups! Please comment feedback?!

published on June 23, 20152 reads 2 readers 2 not completed
Poetry theme breakups ??

Poetry theme breakups ??

Poem number one,

Just a silent stair,
Was our love even there
They say love comes Naturally,
But actually it was a more of a catastrophe
You asked would I be yours
I was Willing to open my doors
But there was nothing but snores
As my walls came down
Off came my crown
Sorry i didn't mean to let you down
At least All we had was our awkward lunch room talks
And our non existent walks
Now that  i finally had time
To realize
Our relationship was just a disguise.   
I guess being single
Is my jingle

Poem number two
I can't sleep,
The feelings are just to deep,
You said you loved me,
How could it be,
I should've known it was fake,
How much more can I take,
I tried not to get attached,
But my heart kind of just latched,
Then it got snatched,
And tore,
I can't take anymore,
The emotions still remain,
Like a stain of pain,
There so hard to contain,
You had me on cloud nine,
By now your not mine,
I feel like I could just ball,
But that would mean I would fall,
Was I to tall,
I didn't know,
Wow you put on a show,
I just got to stay tough,
Even when times get rough
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