Alice in Wonderland?

Alice in Wonderland?

Alice goes mad in the real world, and ends up going to Wonderland once more, only to realize that Wonderland is anything but full of magic

published on December 29, 201560 reads 19 readers 61 not completed
Chapter 1.

Hell on Earth

I looked in the mirror. The same mirror I looked into one hundred times. The cracks in it disfigured my face and body, the dust built nests for all the microscopic bugs. I stared into the dull blue eyes that used to be filled with hope, now sunken in and filled with nothing but the sour, dim blue color. The blonde hair that used to cover my head was now a shadowy color of death and down to my waist. I turned around and looked around my room. The room I lived in for five years, the bright white room that I had known all to well.
"Alice?" The nurse said as she ever so slowly and slightly cracked open the door, my wide sunken eyes stared deep into her deep brown eyes. I didn't blink, nor move, just a slight tilt of the head. "Dr. Goodwell wants to see you..come on Dear." She said as she walked inside the room and by my side. I slowly moved my head with every step she advanced towards me. I watched her throat moved with her gulp of fear. I tilted my head as she lightly guided me out of the room and into the long hallway. I didn't look around as men called out my name, the terrified screaming along side the screaming of the insane. The smell of the disgusting vomit and feces of the mental hit me the moment I left my room.
I sat in the white chair, right across from the 'doctor'. "You can tell me or ask me anything Alice." He said, I looked up at him in silence. After a while of the grueling stillness of the room. I tilted my head, some of my inky hair covered one of my eyes. "....Can a cat smile?" I asked, he looked up at me, shock filled his grey eyes. I kept my eyes wide and my face blank. "Um..I..I believe a cat can not smile." He said, I shot my head up. "WRONG!" I shouted, he jumped back. "A cat can smile." I said calmly, and slowly blinked. "A...Alice, a cat can not smile." He said, I felt the scar on my arm tingle. "Can a caterpillar smoke? Can a beast have it's eye plucked out and put it back in and see out of it?" I asked more and more questions, each question made the doctor more and more annoyed.
"Alice! There is no such thing as Wonderland." He said as he shook his head. "You hit your head after slipping in a rabbit hole, you cut your arm on a tree and almost broke your ankle, Wonderland does not exist. It was a dream Alice." He said, I blinked again. "Oh I assure you, Wonderland is real." I said as I looked out the window, a blue butterfly was at the window. "Absolem." I said, the doctor looked at the window and shook his head. "It is a butterfly Alice..I don't see how the medication isn't helping..maybe I need to get you a stronger prescription." He muttered to himself, but I heard it. Oh yes I heard it all. How he hates me as a patient, wishing I would either die or leave.
He wrote something on a paper and placed it on the table. "I'll have the nurse give you stronger medication." He said, I tilted my head, forcing my smile not to show. Medication..I never took it. The pills laid inside my mattress, being consumed by the springs and slight fluff. I was sent back to my room, where I stood and looked inside the mirror once more. I stared for hour, and hours, and hours, seeing every detail of everything. In the corner of my eye, I saw the window. I walked over to it and looked outside. I shot my eyes down as something hit the glass. I looked around for anything that could have thrown something at the window, but no one was in sight. I looked back up at the moon, only for the noise to come back, I looked down again, and looked at the alleyway.
A white bunny stood there, it's fur missing in some places, it's small suit ripped to shreds and clinging onto it's body for dear life. One of its ears were missing, as was one eye, but the eye was replaced with a pocket watch. We stared deep into each other's eyes before it hopped into the alleyway. I looked around and opened the door. I looked around the hallway, empty besides a little girl rocking back and forth. I walked out of the room and quickly started running, my hair flowing behind me like a black river, the moon shone through the windows, catching my hair just right so it looked like oil spilling. I ran up to the door. Once I open this, an alarm will go off...and I have only three minutes to run. I slammed opened the door, the alarm went off immediately. I started running into the alleyway and looked around. "White rabbit?" I asked as I stopped. Surprisingly, it poked it's head out from a corner, and started running, I followed it.
All the way to a small rabbit hole in the ground.
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Crazy_Otaku_Bitch
Hm so I was reading this and then I thought to myself you should update this oh and I'm going to fix some grammatical errors
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Anime_Trash
And are you Drocell now? Lololol
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Crazy_Otaku_Bitch
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on November 03
Anime_Trash
And Drocell is cute so there is no downside XD
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on November 03
Crazy_Otaku_Bitch
I'm saying fück cause I don't wanna be Drocell
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on November 03
Crazy_Otaku_Bitch
Nope I made it on time
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on November 03
Anime_Trash
Did you miss the bus mate?
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on November 03
Crazy_Otaku_Bitch
FUUUUUUUUUUUUCK
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on November 03
Anime_Trash
Sucks you're Drocell now
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on November 03
Crazy_Otaku_Bitch
No I just say that sometimes
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on November 03
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on November 03
Anime_Trash
Danke
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on November 03
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on November 03
Shingeki_No_Kyojin_Lover
I it!!!!! XD
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Anime_Trash
Heheh yay! X3
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on March 18
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on March 18
Crazy_Otaku_Bitch
Yo bitch you should update this or I will slap you at school
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Crazy_Otaku_Bitch
Yay ^.^
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on March 03
Anime_Trash
Oh my...alright I'll update it
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on March 03
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on March 03
TsumikiMiniwa
KEEP GOING!!! It's AMAZING!!
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Anime_Trash
Aw thanks! alright! X3
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on January 22
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on January 22
breann.west.5
I love this!! Please continue!
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Anime_Trash
I messed up XD I tried fixing the title and it posted before I finished it
Its done now XDXDXD
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on January 09
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on January 09
Ruler_Of_The_Fangirls
Nice new chapter! It's freaking amazing! Keep goin'!
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Anime_Trash
Aw thanks! X3
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Ruler_Of_The_Fangirls
You're welcome!
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on December 30, 2015
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on December 30, 2015
Crazy_Otaku_Bitch
This story is.....Fuckking awesome!Well technically its just currently a chapter....But its still great
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Anime_Trash
Aw thanks Ciel!
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Ruler_Of_The_Fangirls
*squints* The line between those is blurry...
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on December 30, 2015
Anime_Trash
D: D: D: D: D: D:
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on December 30, 2015
Crazy_Otaku_Bitch
He didn't hate him he just thought he was a brat with anger issues
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on December 30, 2015
Ruler_Of_The_Fangirls
(XD meant down point.)
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on December 30, 2015
Ruler_Of_The_Fangirls
Johnathon was a good llama.....who hated Alois. His only doenpoint.
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on December 30, 2015
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on December 30, 2015
Crazy_Otaku_Bitch
Johnathon never liked you though
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on December 30, 2015
Anime_Trash
May Johnathon rest in pieces...I MEAN PEACE
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on December 30, 2015
Crazy_Otaku_Bitch
Alois do you have any words to say about Johnathon
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on December 30, 2015
Ruler_Of_The_Fangirls
RIP, Johnathon. *waves at his grave with a handkerchief*
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on December 30, 2015
Crazy_Otaku_Bitch
His name was Johnathon and he will be missed dearly
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on December 30, 2015
Anime_Trash
XD poor llama
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on December 30, 2015
Ruler_Of_The_Fangirls
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on December 30, 2015
Ruler_Of_The_Fangirls
@AlliceTeea
Poor llama....
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on December 30, 2015
Crazy_Otaku_Bitch
Don't laugh llama death is a very serious matter!!!!
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on December 30, 2015
Anime_Trash
Pffft HAHAHA
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on December 30, 2015
Crazy_Otaku_Bitch
It would have gotten six out of five but a llama got hit by a car
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on December 30, 2015
Anime_Trash
XD That works X3
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on December 30, 2015
Crazy_Otaku_Bitch
It gets five out of five llamas
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on December 30, 2015
Anime_Trash
Of cores! But is it really that good?
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on December 30, 2015
Crazy_Otaku_Bitch
You know Alice in Wonderland is one of my many obsessions
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on December 30, 2015
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on December 30, 2015
Ruler_Of_The_Fangirls
Can you make another chapter? This is really good, and you should make more.
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Anime_Trash
Aw thank you!!
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Ruler_Of_The_Fangirls
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on December 30, 2015
Anime_Trash
Alright
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on December 30, 2015
Ruler_Of_The_Fangirls
You're welcome. But I'm serious, though. You should continue it.
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on December 30, 2015
Rebel_Assasin
ITS FUKN BEAUTIFUL!
I want moar! =0
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Rebel_Assasin
I love it.xd
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Rebel_Assasin
My first chapter is doooone! ^_^
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on December 29, 2015
Anime_Trash
Alright have fun! X3
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on December 29, 2015
Rebel_Assasin
XD I would actually do that, too.
I'm going to work on mine. Soooo =/
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on December 29, 2015
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on December 29, 2015
Rebel_Assasin
The part she asks 20 questions. X3
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on December 29, 2015
Anime_Trash
X3 what's the best part so far?
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on December 29, 2015
Anime_Trash
Aw really? X3
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