Lost in our fears

Lost in our fears

Sometimes you don't want to wake up from a dream... But some other times, you just want to wake up from a nightmare alive...

published on January 27, 2015144 reads 29 readers 36 not completed
Chapter 1.

Introduction

This is just a little introduction to my story. It will not figure in the main story.



* TOC... TOC... TOC * I hear it, I hear its sounds. * TOC... TOC... TOC * The wait becomes unbearable, I must get out of here, I have to go. * TOC... TOC... TOC... * But if I go, it will find me... * TOC... TOC * The noise suddenly stops. I stop my breathing so hard that I feel that my head will explode. * TOC... TOC... TOC * I feel tears climb me to the eyes. My bedroom door opens. I can't see it, but I hear it. * TOC... TOC... TOC * sounds are becoming increasingly strong. It is very close to my wardrobe, it is very close to me.
  
Killer: Toc toc toc! Are you there?

I go back a few inches. I stick my back against the wall and leaves clothes hide my face.

Killer: Stop playing hide-and-seek! Anyway I already found you…

I hear the gnashing of its nails on the door of my wardrobe. I close my eyes.

Killer: Ready or not, Im here...

The door opens violently. The light of the Moon illuminates all my room slightly, but enough that I could see his face. His hair blood-stained, his white skin which seems to be frozen, his sadistic smile that shows its teeth, and finally his eyes reflecting nothing that staring me.

Killer: Found you! And now, you will have to suffer the consequences...

I close my eyes and pays a few tears. I would like to scream as hard as possible but it wouldn’t help.  

Killer: 3...2...1...

I feel the blade back in my heart. I feel the pain of my skin that opens for a few seconds before I see that nothingness. That nothingness that everyone talks. The same nothingness when you know that your dead.

***

Reporter: Hello! We announce at the moment that another murder was committed that night in the country! The victim appears to be a young girl of about 13 years old. The police think it’s the same murderer who has killed the other two families last week. This time, the murderer would be passed through the living room window and killed the victim in her wardrobe. Nobody is safe for the moment, we don’t know in which house he will go for his next murder...
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TricksterOfLife
You gotta update! D:
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on July 21, 2015
sapphirethehedgehog
Nooooo! Sage! D:
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on June 14, 2015
Lady_Artemis
OMG SHE SAW SONIC.EXE!!!!!
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on February 25, 2015
TricksterOfLife
Oh maw gawd. I NEARLY HAD A HEART ATTACK WHEN I READ CELINA'S. OWO ITS JEFF OH NO
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Milea
x3
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Milea
Heehee >:3
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on February 14, 2015
TricksterOfLife
OwO the suspense is killing me
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on February 14, 2015
Lady_Artemis
O_O MILEA HAD JACKIE'S NIGHTMARE WITH CERISE AND THE DEATH SERUM!
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Milea
I know :3 Is it okay? :o
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Milea
That's what I was going to say x3
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on February 14, 2015
Lady_Artemis
No it's okay. It didn't happen in Milea's cuz she's not Divergent, so hers went straight to serum.
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on February 14, 2015
Milea
Oops! Sorry x3
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on February 14, 2015
Lady_Artemis
Yeah! It was class!
Only when Jackie has it, there's also the part before the syringe where Cerise uses a machine to remove Jackie's Divergence.
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infinxy
Amazingly awesome! Please countine!
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on February 10, 2015
SweetSugarGirl
Amazing!
Good!
Dont have words to express.
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on February 06, 2015
Lady_Artemis
AMAZING!
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on February 02, 2015
sapphirethehedgehog
I love this story!
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on January 31, 2015
SwiftElementTheDarkHedgeWolf
I love the new chap..... But it's full of plot twists... T-T
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Milea
xD sorry ._.
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Milea
Oh... Okay xD Thanks! ^^
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on January 31, 2015
SwiftElementTheDarkHedgeWolf
But that's what makes it good... :3
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sapphirethehedgehog
This is why you shouldn't get lost kids XD
Sapphire: The faceless man...hes coming for me...DX
Me: >:3 *puts slender mask on* ROARRRR!
Sapphire: *squels and runs off*
Me: XDDDD I loved this!!!!
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on January 29, 2015
Lady_Artemis
O_O WHY WAS I IN PYJAMAS WTF?!?!
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Milea
Because xD
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Lady_Artemis
Shurrup LuLu!
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on January 29, 2015
Milea
This is just a story xD
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on January 29, 2015
Lady_Artemis
YOU HUMILIATED ME
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on January 28, 2015
MysticMedievalSamuraiPrincess
This is really good so far !!!!
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on January 28, 2015
Milea
Thanks!
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on January 28, 2015
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on January 28, 2015
sapphirethehedgehog
Jackie's fear is slender huh? XP
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Lady_Artemis
It isn't.
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on February 25, 2015
Milea
Hum... You'll see xD
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on January 27, 2015
TricksterOfLife
Is the man without a face Slendy? ^.^
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Milea
Maybe >:3
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