Into the rain

Into the rain

A kid who trys to face his fears but fails.He finds out why he didn't check out the figure in the rain...boo!

published on May 03, 201649 reads 12 readers 10 completed
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Chapter 6.
The darkness

The darkness

I woke back up later that morning I looked at babe as she smiled at me.I kissed her and said good morning and was she doing.she said she slept well.I said great I cuddled her most of that day the only time I wasn't cuddling her is when I went to the restroom and check on Natasha.I ask the doc can we see Natasha he said yes he brought us our daughter I let babe hold her first.she was smiling happily.I was also happy...

Babe smiled and was playing attention to the baby when I saw the figure outside the door looking at Natasha and then slowly looked at me...I slowly looked at my babe..I didn't say anything I thought it would leave us alone.. That night I wasn't able to sleep I remember seeing the figure staring at Natasha like that..

I was hungry so I got up and went to the dinner hall I looked in the place were Natasha and the other baby's were...I looked at the back of the room I saw the figure but it left later on and I went and ate some spaghetti and meatballs...I knew it was watching me the whole time.but I kept eating because if it touched babe or Natasha I would try my best to kill it...

Then as I walked back to the room I saw the darkness off the hall I saw something that I didn't understand...there was no eyes but there was red glowing dots..idk if it was eyes because I saw there was no eyes so I think its aggressive in the dark...I was staring at it for 12 minutes until it went the other way...I went to the room my babe was in and cuddled her she was awake watching TV...I smiled and kissed her I made sure she was sleep and locked the door and slept with my arm around her.....
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Tankbeast1271
Can't tell u
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on May 07, 2016
ikigaii
HHHHNNNGG WAT IS THIS CREATURRREEE
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on May 07, 2016
Tankbeast1271
I'm gonna tease u all?
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on May 04, 2016
Tankbeast1271
If u go back to part 1 it has no eyes
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on May 04, 2016
Tankbeast1271
Well Its not human btw
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on May 04, 2016
sugarcubes
It's a stalker? :0
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on May 04, 2016
Tankbeast1271
U guys want a part two?
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sugarcubes
Ok
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on May 03, 2016
sugarcubes
YES PLEASE!!
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Tankbeast1271
Ok I'll make it tomorrow
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