Into the rain

Into the rain

A kid who trys to face his fears but fails.He finds out why he didn't check out the figure in the rain...boo!

published on May 03, 201649 reads 12 readers 10 completed
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Chapter 5.
Its coming for me

Its coming for me

I woke up at 12:00pm...I will never forget what I saw it was babe snoring.she was adorable. I got up brushed my teeth and went for a jog and came back at around 6:00am. I made her breakfast in bed and watched her eat.I knew that the baby was coming today so I got her dressed and we went too the hospital...

As she gave birth I was already thinking of the names she told me.it was a girl I was so happy. We called her Natasha..she was our daughter..I smiled and kissed babe but once I looked up and out the glass to the hallway..the figure was there..I just let it leave but I stayed there with my babe all night. The doctors had brought in a double bed I told them I was staying.I cuddled with her all night Natasha was taken to a room with a lot of other kids.

I went and checked on her I was looking at her through the window. When out of no where lights were shouting off at the end of the hallway. The figure was walking towards me and the lights were cutting off I ran back to the room..I closed the door and lay back down and acted sleep but I heard the door open and shut. I kept my eyes closed then I heard breathing...I opened my eye a little bit but it didn't notice I looked at it and shut my eyes and it left the room 18 minutes later and had fallen asleep.....
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Tankbeast1271
Can't tell u
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on May 07, 2016
ikigaii
HHHHNNNGG WAT IS THIS CREATURRREEE
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on May 07, 2016
Tankbeast1271
I'm gonna tease u all?
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on May 04, 2016
Tankbeast1271
If u go back to part 1 it has no eyes
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on May 04, 2016
Tankbeast1271
Well Its not human btw
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on May 04, 2016
sugarcubes
It's a stalker? :0
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on May 04, 2016
Tankbeast1271
U guys want a part two?
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sugarcubes
Ok
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on May 03, 2016
sugarcubes
YES PLEASE!!
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Tankbeast1271
Ok I'll make it tomorrow
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