Into the rain

Into the rain

A kid who trys to face his fears but fails.He finds out why he didn't check out the figure in the rain...boo!

published on May 03, 201649 reads 12 readers 10 completed
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Chapter 7.
Listen

Listen

Me and babe woke up with from a noise from the hallway...I got up babe got up too I cared her on my back. I saw the figure before she did so she didn't see it because I went back in the room before she could see the figure... I layed babe on the bed and went and looked at the figure again the red wasn't there so I just thought it was observing me.until it started walking toward me...

I went back in the room closed the door and cuddled babe until morning.she smiled and ask what was that in the hallway I said I think it was just the building but I know it was the figure... I looked at the door and it wasn't there so I just looked around I saw it pass the door and kept walking... I just fell asleep with babe..

We woke up the next morning and I asked the doctor when would we get to go home... He said we will go home in 3 days I said ok and babe said she was hungry I went and brought her some food back..I gave her the food and she gave me a kiss and said thank you...I smiled and said no problem. The doctor asked was that thing walking down hallways me.

He looked like he had no sleep I said no it wasn't me.I went back to the room..later that night it was walking around again...there was a flash light down the hall..It was the doctor I recognized his voice.. I lay there until he said who are u..I got up and ran to the door...babe “said u ok babe" I said yes and everything would be ok?...I looked at the doc and whispered run now!!!! I knew that he was talking to the figure... He ran to his office and closed the door lay back down and I listened as the figure stopped at the door I know because I looked at it through the window and watched it all night.....
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Tankbeast1271
Can't tell u
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on May 07, 2016
ikigaii
HHHHNNNGG WAT IS THIS CREATURRREEE
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on May 07, 2016
Tankbeast1271
I'm gonna tease u all?
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on May 04, 2016
Tankbeast1271
If u go back to part 1 it has no eyes
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on May 04, 2016
Tankbeast1271
Well Its not human btw
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on May 04, 2016
sugarcubes
It's a stalker? :0
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on May 04, 2016
Tankbeast1271
U guys want a part two?
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sugarcubes
Ok
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on May 03, 2016
sugarcubes
YES PLEASE!!
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Tankbeast1271
Ok I'll make it tomorrow
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