Qfeast Crash.

Qfeast Crash.

(Qfeast please don't delete this I wuv you guys so much) Red: At least I didn't have my kids out of incest! Tangle: At least I don't have 17 of them! Me: Both of you shut up! Tangle: Don't you have a story to write? Me: Oh yeah. ^-^U Red&Tangle: *argue in Italian.*

published on September 26, 2015140 reads 30 readers 21 not completed
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Chapter 10.
What do they really want?

What do they really want?

When I got up it was around noon or so. I saw Amy in my room smiling down at me. "Hey sleepyhead." "Sapph, can I be alone? And howd you get in here?" "Your door was unlocked." I looked at her kinda confused then back at my door. I was pretty sure that I had locked it. I noticed she was dressed in a black and white dress like her oc had worn in a picture she made. I was pretty sure I had locked it.
"I'm not really like my oc ya know, I like being alone." She said sorry and left. I got out of bed and saw I was still wearing that weird outfit I had found. After getting myself ready I grabbed a red and black laptop on my vanity and opened it. Everything I had on my laptop back home was on here. Oh yeah, my picture of Shaden and Alexis I was working on. I got to work on editing the photos making Shaden look like Underfell Papyrus and making Alexis look like Underfell Sans. I created the collar around her neck and started working my way to creating the jacket. I stopped suddenly.
I remembered what I had seen on that computer and I sighed in anger and frustration. I had a really good memory which, at times like this, I hated. Maybe I just needed to forget everything and honestly, that's what I wanted to do. I turned on the tv to watch Gravity Falls, my favorite show while I worked on my drawing in my sketchpad. I started drawing the cover page for my new comic "What Happens After".
It's an undertale comic that basically has Chara taking control of the Underground while Frisk gives up exploring to live a normal life after playing through one last neutral run and letting Chara control everything.
After they leave Chara brings Gaster back to figure out how to turn human souls into monster souls so he (yes in this I'm calling both Chara and Frisk males. Fight me. -_- ) can gain more LV. In this Papyrus, Toriel, Mettaton, Alphys, and Asgore are dead. Sans out of desperation decides to work for Gaster, hoping for a way to bring Papyrus back while Flowey tries to get Frisk to make Chara step down from power as Undyne leads a rebellion against the "king". I started drawing Frisk's concept art and heard a knock on the door when I was finished. "Come in." I yelled while keeping my eyes on the drawing. I saw Jeremy come in. "Hello Alexis." "What do you want?" Instead of answering my question he only took my sketchbook. "Hey! Dude give that back!" He looked through my new designs for Frisk, Gaster, and Undyne. Even the few ocs I had drawn for my friends. "Determination...Justice...Integrity...Kindness...Spirit..." He muttered flipping through the designs, glancing at me from time to time. "What's this for?" "I'm working on a new comic for the Undertale fandom. It's my own take on it. Ya know, make something different." He only chuckled. "If you get any fame from this, tell your fans about us." He dropped the book on the ground with a chuckle before striding out of the room. I growled and picked up my book, wanting to punch him in his stupidly perfect face. "Oh and by the way, your uniform suits you." With that said, he was gone.
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Weiss_Schnee
I can't believe this was made back in the time when my user was still Dauntless XD
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Noescaping
Yeah that was a while ago
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on April 16, 2017
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on April 24, 2016
sapphirethehedgehog
This is awesome!!! :D hehee, I'm pretty sure I'd reconises you though :3
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Noescaping
Well you were in a dream state to also its another new chapter
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sapphirethehedgehog
Oh cool ^.^
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on March 07, 2016
sapphirethehedgehog
That's sound familer.....
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on March 07, 2016
sapphirethehedgehog
I'm sorry but I don't know what your talking about ^.^U
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on March 07, 2016
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on March 07, 2016
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on March 07, 2016
sapphirethehedgehog
Ik, I read that one too ^.^
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on March 06, 2016
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on March 06, 2016
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on March 05, 2016
milfs
Right. I changed my username to TwiliTwili. (Used to be Rustpaw)
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Noescaping
okay
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on December 31, 2015
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on December 31, 2015
foilflingza
i cant wait for this to be updated agaaiiinnn
this is really good btw
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Noescaping
its updated again
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on March 05, 2016
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on October 24, 2015
sapphirethehedgehog
X3 another one bites the dust XD
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Noescaping
took a while but its updated
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on March 05, 2016
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on March 05, 2016
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on October 13, 2015
foilflingza
KYYYLLEEEE
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Noescaping
Guessing ya know him
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foilflingza
yeah he's one of my best friends
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on October 13, 2015
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on October 12, 2015
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on October 12, 2015
foilflingza
woah
This is great so far :D
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on October 01, 2015