Take Me Home (Layla's Story)

Take Me Home (Layla's Story)

This is the story of a young hedgehog. Torn apart from her parents when she was young, all she's known in life is one little room she's been trapped in, and torture and abuse. All she wishes for in life is to get away from her abuser and live free. Will it ever come true?

published on June 06, 2014137 reads 34 readers 15 not completed
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Chapter 5.

Chapter 4: Break Free

Layla
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This morning was filled with the usual. I'm only allowed out of my room to take a shower for five minutes. I like the water on cold because it numbs my wounds and bruises. I savour those five minutes as long as I possibly can before I have to return to my room.
But as I return, I hear the front door slam shut. I peak out of the bathroom window and spot Tye making his way to the shops down the street.
I smile. I am left alone.
I have been waiting for this.
I quickly change and run as fast as my injured legs can carry me. It's enough to reach the front door, so I slightly open it to peak out.
His car is gone. Perfect.
I open the door fully and walk out, but I leave the door open.
An act of defiance against Tye.
I breathe the fresh air. At long last, I have escaped that small room.
I have escaped sixteen years of torture and abuse. I was never even let out for school.
I then spot a hedgehog walking towards me, and my body tenses.
Is that Tye? Oh gosh I am so dead!
"Don't tense your body up," the hedgehog says. "You'll hurt those wounds."
That's not Tye. Tye's voice is too cold, too cruel, too heartless to sound like the voice that just spoke.
"Who are you?" I ask.
When he reaches closer, I can see his fur is brown. I relax myself."
"My name is Eli," he says. "I'm not going to hurt you."
"How did you know I had bruises and wounds?"
"I'm a Freedom Fighter. My crew and I were given a special assignment around you, Layla."
He takes off the jacket he was wearing and places it around my arms.
"Let me take you to our HQ. You'll be safe with us," Eli adds, and I nod.

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We step inside a rather tall building and a squirrel is the first to greet us.
"We've been waiting for you, Layla," she says. "My name is Sally Acorn."
"Hi," I reply.
Sally then turns to Eli. "Thank you for bringing her here, Eli. You can return to your group now. I think your group leader will be most pleased with you."
Eli nods, and walks off, while Sally leads me to another room.
She opens the door, and my jaw drops.
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toughwolf3
NOOO11
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on June 09, 2016
milfs
Can u write more and add me PWEAZE?!
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on June 27, 2015
AlwaysBeInfinite
Whoa.... It took you a long time to make the next chap xD but it's nice.. :3
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on February 02, 2015
DiamondTheHedgehog
Awesome story! Can u add me?
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on August 11, 2014
Weiss_Schnee
Np ;)
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on June 06, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Thank you for adding me!
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on June 06, 2014
AlwaysBeInfinite
I can't wait for chapter 4! If it's OK with you can my OC be part of the story? You know if it's OK with you.
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on June 06, 2014
Weiss_Schnee
I am writing more MD, and yeah I'm taking OC's. That's why I decided to include FandomLover's OC, Eli.
Do you want Dawn to be part of the Freedom Fighters???
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on June 06, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Please write more! Tell me if you accept OC's. It's okay if you don't.
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on June 06, 2014
Fiendish_Heathen
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on June 06, 2014
Fiendish_Heathen
Can't Wait For Third Chapter
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on June 06, 2014
AlwaysBeInfinite
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on June 06, 2014
AlwaysBeInfinite
Log the story! :,)
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on June 06, 2014
Fiendish_Heathen
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on June 06, 2014
Cristallite
nice
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on June 06, 2014