Take Me Home (Layla's Story)

Take Me Home (Layla's Story)

This is the story of a young hedgehog. Torn apart from her parents when she was young, all she's known in life is one little room she's been trapped in, and torture and abuse. All she wishes for in life is to get away from her abuser and live free. Will it ever come true?

published on June 06, 2014137 reads 34 readers 15 not completed
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Chapter 4.
Chapter 3: New Team Member

Chapter 3: New Team Member

Dawn
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I am rather scared about meeting my new colleagues in the Freedom Fighters. Or at least, 2 of them. I know Jackie quite well. Sally has teamed me with Jackie's group that consists of her, Nayma, and a guy called Eli.
I walk into their shared office, and Jackie is the first to greet me.
"Dawn! Hey girl!" she says. "How are you?"
"I'm fine," I say. She raises an eyebrow at me. "Jackie, please stop pretending to be Candor."
"Sorry, force of habit, can't help myself," she says. "But yeah, I'll stick with Dauntless."
We both giggle. It's quite funny seeing Jackie pretending to be someone she's not.
"Nayma, come meet Dawn," Jackie says, and a dark grey hedgehog walks over.
"Hi, you're Dawn, right? I'm Nayma," she says.
"Yeah, I'm Dawn," I say. "I'll be working in your team from now on. What's the case?"
"We've been locating a girl named Layla who's been tortured and abused most of her life," Jackie explains. "We sent Eli out to find her now that we know her location. All we need now is information on her abuser."
"That sounds horrible! Why would someone do that?" I ask.
"Because some people are just sick in the head," Nayma replies.

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After a while, we've managed to find a little information on the girl's abuser.
"Got it," Nayma says. "It's in the same house that Layla is in."
"Well obviously, if they're keeping her hostage, Nayma," Jackie replies.
"Whatever. Anyway, the abuser is a he. His name is Tye, and he's a green hedgehog with red eyes."
"Let's get that info to Eli," I say.
I've grown rather fond of Nayma, which only makes me more excited to meet Eli now.
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toughwolf3
NOOO11
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on June 09, 2016
milfs
Can u write more and add me PWEAZE?!
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on June 27, 2015
AlwaysBeInfinite
Whoa.... It took you a long time to make the next chap xD but it's nice.. :3
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on February 02, 2015
DiamondTheHedgehog
Awesome story! Can u add me?
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on August 11, 2014
Weiss_Schnee
Np ;)
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on June 06, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Thank you for adding me!
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on June 06, 2014
AlwaysBeInfinite
I can't wait for chapter 4! If it's OK with you can my OC be part of the story? You know if it's OK with you.
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on June 06, 2014
Weiss_Schnee
I am writing more MD, and yeah I'm taking OC's. That's why I decided to include FandomLover's OC, Eli.
Do you want Dawn to be part of the Freedom Fighters???
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on June 06, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Please write more! Tell me if you accept OC's. It's okay if you don't.
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on June 06, 2014
Fiendish_Heathen
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Fiendish_Heathen
Can't Wait For Third Chapter
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on June 06, 2014
AlwaysBeInfinite
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AlwaysBeInfinite
Log the story! :,)
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Fiendish_Heathen
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Cristallite
nice
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on June 06, 2014