The 100 (Qfeast Edition)

So I posted a question asking if people were okay with being added to the story. So yeah fun X3

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Chapter 16.

Season 2: Chapter 1 "A New Day Dawns" Yamilette

Author's Note: I know the ending to season one was VERY Anti-Climactic I promise this one will be better. Season one was meant to build the characters themselves a little bit and kill those who weren't needed whatsoever. Thank you for your patience and enjoy


It has been a year since the building crash and I built myself a camp, but it felt unsafe. Every time I came home I had a feeling someone else was there. When the building crashed I was saved. I thought it was my friends but it wasn't. It was grounders. They tortured me for what felt like years. When I finally escaped I didn't have a chance to save my friends, but today I have a way of saving them.

I unsheathe my sword and strike it on a flint starting a fire, then I hide thirty meters (120 feet) away watching waiting for someone to arrive when I heard rustling. I started to sneak closer when I heard voices. I charged as fast as I could and grabbed the first one by the arm, slammed him to the floor and held my sword to his throat. "Nobody move or he dies!" I shouted

Suddenly one of them gasped "Wait Yamilette?" I look at them and realized there were two people. Phoenix and Abby.


"Oh my god Phoenix I'm so sorry!" I got off as fast as possible


Phoenix got up slowly and rubbed his arm "It's cool I guess... Where have you been?! We all thought you were dead!"


I looked away "I wish I was." I took my shirt off showing them the hundreds of scars lining my body then I put it back on "Ten cuts every day... Samantha and John are suffering the same fate... but longer. I was going to save them!"


Phoenix and Abby were horrified then gulped "Welp it just so happens we uh... we have a grounder friend who can help" Abby said


Yamilette's jaw dropped "Are you serious? Who?!"


*Time skip to the bunker*


"Oh so you survived the building huh?! That's awesome!! I'm so sorry some of you died... It wasn't my fault!"


I sighed immediately recognizing Milo after I had come "Yeah yeah yeah... All I need to know is how you can help me"


Milo sighed "Fine whatever not much for talking I guess. Look your friends are most likely being held by trikru if your cuts indicate anything. This means they are going to be overly paranoid and have guards stationed everywhere. UNLESS! A trikru general visits. Then everyone will gather to drink except for those who are unlucky enough to be on Patrol."


I sigh "That's great and all but how are we gonna get a grounder general to agree to this plan?"


I looked around and saw everyone looking at me like I was stupid "Um... I'm a grounder general Yamilette" Milo said


I blushed embarrassed and looked away "Okay then waht're we waiting for. What's the plan"


Milo smiled "Alright! Okay so the plan is once I arrive and everyone starts drinking Seg and Phoenix will cause a distraction while they're doing that Yamiletee , you and Jello will free the prisoners and Birds will make sure there are no stragglers who notice you. Are we clear?" Everyone nodded "Good then let's go"


*Time skip*


I sat with Jello waiting for the gunshots when there was shouting coming from the camp. I looked up and saw a female grounder fighting Milo. She was easily dodging their attacks then she ducked and tripped Milo. While the was falling she grabbed their sword and held it too their neck. We thought we'd have to go in and help them when the female took the sword away and seemed to laugh before helping Milo up then the gunshots went off and everybody ran off. We took our opportunity and ran to the cage where we saw the traitor Jason and Samantha. We opened the cage and untied them. They immediately fell to the floor unable to move. We covered them up and carried them out of the camp and back to the bunker where we waited for the rest of them to return. While we waited we treated to their most recent wounds. "THe grounders... they are such savages... who knows what they did to them" I sighed sadly "Jason was a jerk who was going to betray us but... that doesn't meant he deserved this."


Jello nodded "Yeah that's true... Oh well. They're wounds are bandaged and treated but there's no guarantee there won't be Infections. For now we just wait for the others."


We waited for a bit in silence then I decided to break the silence "What have we become?"


Jello answered my question by reciting a quote "Trying to rediscover who you are is hard when a part of you is missing"


I smiled and recited a quote of my own "But we find more pieces of who we are with each passing day. We just wait for a new day to dawn"
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Jason_the_hedgehog
My characters dead:jack and hyper sadly :(
My characters alive:Jason John funny thing is that there names start with j
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on May 16, 2018
dark_rose
I started watching the 100 because of this
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dark_rose
So far I'm only on episode 2 lol
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Glitterburn
Oh XD
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on February 28, 2018
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on February 28, 2018
Glitterburn
Do you like it? XD
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dark_rose
I love it I finished season 4 awhile ago and I’m waiting for 5 to be on netflix!! It is my favorite tv show.
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
Omg so sad!
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Glitterburn
Yeah i was actually choking while writing this I was like "Oh god... This is so terrible. i know i've made messed up stuff before but this... oh god"
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on February 14, 2018
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on February 14, 2018
Jason_the_hedgehog
Why do I have John as a prisoner?
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on February 03, 2018
Jason_the_hedgehog
How come I'm the traitor?
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on February 03, 2018
Jason_the_hedgehog
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on February 02, 2018
Orange.Soda
Wow
You made me accurate to my in-person personality, cool!
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on January 30, 2018
Yamilettethehedgehog101
Nice! :0
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Glitterburn
Nice what?
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Glitterburn
I know >:) XD
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on January 29, 2018
Yamilettethehedgehog101
You're so evil XD
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on January 29, 2018
Glitterburn
Well I'mma be honest. You are alive but you're being tortured along side Samantha and John -w-
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on January 29, 2018
Yamilettethehedgehog101
I'm fine with that I really like how I die at times in stories X3
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on January 29, 2018
Glitterburn
Because you might be dead?
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on January 29, 2018
Yamilettethehedgehog101
Of course not why would I be? :3
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on January 29, 2018
Glitterburn
Oh yeah X3 I didn't like it at first so I made some changes -w- but you aren't upset?
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on January 29, 2018
Yamilettethehedgehog101
That I love the status you made
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
You got my title card right X3
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Glitterburn
XD jk
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Glitterburn
WHyzat?
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on January 29, 2018
Yamilettethehedgehog101
Lol I thought you got mad XD
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Glitterburn
I'm glad i can do something right T-T
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
Omg the way I tried to stop them from killing Samantha really shows my character irl O_O
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Glitterburn
Yeah. Also what do you think of the cliff hanger? What do you think will happen X3
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Glitterburn
Yeah two deaths in one chapter But there is a chance of survival for Samantha lol. But yeah. If I went by the show it'd be like ten character deaths a chapter XD
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on January 28, 2018
Yamilettethehedgehog101
Yeah it was very shocking that they killed her X3
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Glitterburn
Theorizing is hard to master lol XD but was it a good cliff hanger X3
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on January 28, 2018
Yamilettethehedgehog101
Oh my bad I'm not really good at this XD
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on January 28, 2018
Glitterburn
Well I mean the chair was already knocked down. That's kinda the end lol XD
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on January 28, 2018
Yamilettethehedgehog101
Oh uh maybe I save Samantha before the chair goes down XD
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
Is it okay if you change my crush to Jason? I know him more than the others and because I want me to like boys like irl to match me its fine if you put a girl having a crush on me its only the crush for me thats bothering me a also the new chapters are great!
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Glitterburn
Aight I told everyone to tell me if they were okay with it. Simple. I just odn't know much about everyone so I used a random generator lol
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
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Glitterburn
Yeah basically you Birds, and Pheonix find Samantha stabbing Seg and the dead body of Hyper (Since he had the most votes)
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on January 28, 2018
Yamilettethehedgehog101
Oh okay I'm glad I didn't upset you and that's cool can't wait to read it XD
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Glitterburn
Why would I be upset. I need the opinions of the people in my story XD by the way you are the character it's following in Chapter Three
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
Oh okay lol sorry if I upsetted you
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on January 27, 2018
dark_rose
I don't want to die :( my friend likes the part about her thanks
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on January 26, 2018
dark_rose
If you wanted a name My friend in chapter 1. It could be Madeline
-Abby
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dark_rose
Ya that would be good my friend read the chapter and liked it
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on January 27, 2018
Glitterburn
Hm would you be okay with me adding Madeline as a supporting character?
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on January 25, 2018
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on January 25, 2018
Jason_the_hedgehog
I think this is the 1st time ttime me and yameilette have been emerys
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Glitterburn
Oh dang XD
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on January 24, 2018
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on January 24, 2018
dark_rose
You got my gender right to
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on January 24, 2018
ThreeBirds
Thanks, I can’t wait for the rest of the story!
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ThreeBirds
Oof, it seems Birds is nothing like me—
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Glitterburn
Well I'm just basing things off of character and well it was a misunderstanding plus if you were raised on the Ark (Well... any of us) We'd be like this XD
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on January 24, 2018
dark_rose
This is great I love it so far
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dark_rose
My story is great
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Glitterburn
I'm glad you like it X3
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
Nice I love my story! :D
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Glitterburn
Thanks XD honestly I spent the most time on yours cause I was like "K... there needs to be some drama... How about... this. yeah that's good... no no no... Let's make her connected to one of the other characters... yeah perfect" and bam there is your story XD
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Jason_the_hedgehog
If you need help with this story like you ran out of ideas I can help
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Glitterburn
Awesome. I'll make sure you keep your word on that XD
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